The Breakup

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A breakup leads to her lover finding someone else.
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Brittni4u
Brittni4u
5,147 Followers

Tho the timing displays unjust,
And cruel describes the stage.
Memories remaining are kept a must,
While shaking our fists of rage.

How can perfection abruptly cease?
Transforming the sun to rain.
Struggling now to find one's peace,
That perfection disguised the pain.

Pointed fingers, fault assigned,
How could you quit the game?
Self-reflection, the truth I find,
Yes, me, the one to blame.

When t’was good, t’was the best,
Laughing, writing and fucking.
Needs not met, emotional unrest,
Progression slowed by ducking.

Let you in, you scream at me,
Why turn your back?
Please allow my love, you’ll see,
To cure all you lack.

Dreams be dashed and hearts do split,
For my love who loves another.
Reality's not a story nor skit,
On fantasy, we all do smother.

Trade nothing except the ending,
Amazing trumped the strife.
The outcome is forever pending,
To live our happiest life.

The best of luck, I do wish,
To the wonderful friend and mother.
Happiness sealed with one last kiss,
To my love who loves another.

Brittni4u
Brittni4u
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NICHOLXNICHOLXalmost 2 years ago

Sad but true. I liked it. FIVE!!!

FOUNTAINPEN67FOUNTAINPEN67over 3 years ago
Five stars!

Perfectly captures the kaleidoscope of emotions one feels in a break-up! Well done.

FortbruceFortbruceover 3 years ago

Great poem Britt!! 😁👍🏻

OneAuthorOneAuthorover 3 years ago
Beautiful poetry

Thank you so much for sharing these words.

ipreferoralipreferoralover 3 years ago

Wow. Very adult, very painful, because it's complicated.

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