The Cherry Picker

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The Cherry Picker


The cherry picker
grumbled along
picking cherries
one by one

big ones
little ones
red ones and
over-ripened

weaving its way
around the bark
a delicate maneuver
spreading limbs apart

some come willing
some come hard
some come easy
others do not

with its long shaft
it probed the bush
picking a cherry
with a gentle push

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Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 16 years ago
^

Too funny, a pickin' and a grinnin'

cherries_on_snowcherries_on_snowalmost 18 years ago
love extended metaphor

particularly when it is slick enough to not become overworn. ;-D

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenabout 18 years ago
The Cherry Picker...

is a peach of a poem, you plum you! <wink> I have seen in the last few of your posts especially, a true uniqueness of style that only you could achieve; a combination of zen like feel and the sense of a light touch in fable form.

This cherry tops the cake, Art!<grin>

Vixxx

EmJ0385EmJ0385about 18 years ago
Mine was never over-ripe when picked.

Tho it sure cud've ripened more fore it was picked Such a fun little poem!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Made

me laugh, love the innuedo ;-)

oregon_galoregon_galabout 18 years ago
clever!!!

just down right clever!

PatHous56PatHous56about 18 years ago
Oh My!

Has it been that long since the cherry picker came my way? It may have been gentle but it sure wasn't soft!

Patricia

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
~~

I like ~

It's so innocent

An 8-year-old could read it and picture a machine;

But show it to an adult

And that mind draws an enitrely different picture.

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittabout 18 years ago
**5**

ITS not ZEN but I heard the joke by the china man. Wise man just spread lims! <grin

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
sounds like

a cotton picking cherryo to me...winks...

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