the dreamy breakdown

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1st person narrative of an erotic breakdown
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So here it is picture the scene your driving along a country road at night in your car .
You dont see a pot hole in the road , next minute you hear a bang .. to top it off your phone has not one bar
Your thinking what do i do , your scared its dark and you have no idea about cars and how to fix it .
Stick or twist ? You get out and have a quick look as your body trembles in fear picturing thise movies where the traveler has their throat slit .
You can see its a flat tire as you kick at it and let out a little scream ? Do you have a spare , or the tools to change it ? You have no idea .
You decide its probably best to just get in car press the hazard and hope someone comes to your aid as you shed a little tear
You put on the radio to try and pass the time , hours pass with not a single car drove past , you wasnt sure what to do .
Maybe stay in the car wait do daylight and make the walk when the sky is blue ?
As your eyes start to close , rain starts to pour with a tap tap tap on the roof and windscreen playing on your brain .
As a little flicker appears in your mirror , your eyes gaze open what was that you wonder ..omg its a car as you wish for the driver to stop and be sane .
Yes its me **
Im driving along the country road rain pouring down i see a little car on side with its hazards on .
Hmm is it safe ? Ive seen those movies where they trap the guy and soon his body is gone .
I slow down as i go past the parked car it looks like a lady and she is all alone , its raining its late in a bad place , i must help you .
I reverse the truck and pull in , chuck my coat on and walk out tap in your window asking if your ok and if there is anything i can do ? .
You wind down your window and explain you have a flat and no idea what to do .. first thing i do is search for a spare .
I search underneath and switch my trucks headlights on for vision , in see the spare and start to make the repair
Im going to need your help , its wet i need you to keep a hand on the jack make sure it doesnt slip , hesistant at first you soon agree .
I can see your not really dressed for it (skirt , heels and top ) so i take off my coat and hand it to you , both soaking wet and im thinking why me .
Spare is on , looks like your good to go you thank me (seems sincere ) you then jump in the car and try to start as i walk back to the truck *tick tick oh no the battery is dead .
You start to freak as i say dont worry ill jump you ( the car battery that is ) as i jump in truck try to start *tick tick i groan loud and against the steering wheel i bash my head .
Why me ? .. i walk over and jump in passenger side of your car im really sorry but it seems we both have a problem neither will start .
I have blankets and heat with lots of space in my truck we may have to stay overnight your welcome to stay in my truck with no insuation your a hussy or a tart .
Your understanabley hesistant , you dont know me youd feel safer in your car i ofcorse accept this and say if you need me ill just be up the front .
Being wet you try the heaters to dry you as you shiver , the lights start to dim and you notice the power is starting to die completely you keep saying to yourself i wont get scared no i wont
I get back to my truck take all my clothea off dry myself and wrap around in the blankets as cosy as i can for my over night stay .
Your lips start to numb you cant stop the shivering as your body starts to ache you have no choice but to join the stranger in his truck no matter what anyone else may say .
As i lay there cosy and warm i hear a tap on my window screen , i notice you standing there oh god im naked ! I wrap the blanket around and open the door to my truck .
After talking and getting you comfortable i give you a clean shirt and turn around before you get under the cover realising you are now stuck .
As you lay down kind of uncomfortable laying so close to a strange man you look at me as i lay with my eyes closed and suddenly start to think im cute .
You didnt notice it before with all the drama but you just start to think wow what a hero , knight in shining armour and yet we both lay here a on mute .
Now your brain starts to wonder loads , is he gay , married or not into me at all .. this is like a womans fantasy no ? .
Hmm you think how can i get him to wake up so i can get to know him a little better , you look around for something to make a noise as you trun around quickly *bang * your knee catches the truck door (hes awake ) but not the way you wanted it to go .
I ask are you ok ? I lean over towards you resting my head on my hand as i softly speak , you look at me and say all is fine but you wanted to say thank you again .
After realising no thanks needed you ask questions about me , which im happy to answer .. thats not me being vain
After about an hour of talking then being comfortable with each other
We lay pretty close wrapped up then *flash !bang !* lightening and thunder makes.me jump and you jump scared almost laying directly ontop of me
As we look into each others eyes im wowed i didnt notice just how.beautiful you were as we were stuck in a longing gaze with blankets fallen down for all to see .
Without knowing it your hand was pressed just above my cock the other against my bicep *awkward * after a split second you quickly move your hand you apoligise as i laugh out loud .
You turn away embaressed apoligising as i laugh and say its fine , body warmth is never a bad thing im not shy quite the opposite ..im proud .
As i swoosh the blanket clear and you go all red , you cant help but look at my bulging chest beautiful sculptered you , you try not to peek at my man hood but its glaring back in the corner of your eye
You know you shouldnt but you cant help but want to feel down my body and just grab hold but you resist and compliment the body and give a little joke about my long manhood standing to attention as all the naughty feelings start to fly .
I get the impression me being the hero tonight wasnt the worst thing after all , this could be a very good night indeed , i say youve now seen all of me .. do i get the pleasure of seeing all of you ?
You look back at me all shy , yet inside your kind of excited , knowing this is a fantasy for most women knight to the rescue who then makes sweet love to you .
My cock starts to thrlb as you look into my eyes with no more then a stare and silence you give your bottom lip a bite which makes me just wanna take a hold .
As you play you hand on your thigh and start to raise the shirt up slightly to show then beautifuly firm butt , i want you so badly its time to be forward and be bold !.
I place my hand on your thigh and softly move up your body starts to get tiglishing as i reach around and give your bum a firm squeeze and pulling you towards me .
You let out a little pleasureful sigh as you get pulled towards me your heart beats faster and faster as i pull you in close and kiss those soft lips , you feel my hard cock poking you as a chissled chest is all your eyes can see .
Mmm you cant believe what is happening , the kissing is giving you butterflys and your sooo turned on you can feel yourself getting moist as my cock slowly rubs against your clit .
My hand slides down to inside your thighs and 2 fingers start to rub your clit side to side before sliding inside you , as a loud sigh comes out your mouth with my every firm push .. that sexual fire has well and truely been lit .
As you head pulls back with pleasure , i push my fingers insade against your g spot pressing firmly up and down as you grab a firm hold of my cock and start to rub as you start to groan oh my god .
I lean in and start to kiss your neck as my fingers press harder and faster against your g spot letting out a squishy sound as you scream , you cant take it anymore you say give it to me , give me your long hard rod ! .
Mm as your hand pulls my cock down hard i cant take much more i want to fuck you so bad right now ! .
I turn you over onto your back and rub your g spot faster as my fingers scissor in and our expanding inside your pussy , your hand over your head as you let out the screams i can feel your body start to quiver and shake ,oh wow !
Your body starts to tremble as your pussy opens up and squirts its warm juices all over me and my trucks seat mmm thats so fucking hot i whisper in your ear as you lay shuddering out of breath .
You pull me in close kissing me and horny as ever wanking my hard cock against your pussy and begging me to slide it in , fuck my pussy to death .
I lean in and kiss you before pulling back n slapping my hard cock on the wall of your pussy rubbing your clit ans getting you to squirt on my cock once more , biting down on your arm you continue to scream give it to me .
I spread your legs raising you a little from the seat and slowly grund just the bulging head of my cock inside you softly spreading your pussy furthee open with each gentle thrust , its a little tight and with no lube a spit on my cock it shall have to be .
I get deeping and deeper inside your tight wet pussy and wuth every thurst you release a groan , god bby your pussy feels so good ! .
I start twist up down and around inside you making sure i pleasure ever little piece of your glorious pussy , mm im in the mood .
I raise your legs up before pushing them back towards your head and ina pressup position ontop of you i pound that pussy deep ,hard and so fast !.
You cant take it its a mixture of pain and pleasure and your legs shake like jelly going all numb and with one large thrust you explode and scream .. as i slow down and wait for the orgasm to slowly pass
I go again hard and fast not letting you take a breath , i pull off leaning back on my knees infront you thrusting hard so the head of my cock rubs up against your g spot .
The pleasure on your face grows as you climax once more and the veins on your head start to bulge and your legs push me away as you turn and shudder your pussy cant take anymore .. is that the end ? I think not ! .
As you lay to your side i lay beside you thrusting inside you once more as my body slaps against your ass i kiss your neck and pulling your hair back pushing myself against you back and forth .
I reach around and grab a firm hold of your boobs and use my feet to push against your levering my body up and down getting nice and deep inside you grinding up and down pushing further and further north .
I the push your bod forward whilst holding your asa back giving it a spank as i hold onto it pushing you on and off of my long hard pounding so hard as the sweat drips down my body and glistens yours .
Your groans are so fucking hot you make me wanna explode all over you , as you climax again this time pulling away , you turn around towards me slide youe between my legs getting on all fours .
You start to rub my cock again this time every time you pull down your suck around my head *oh god that feels so good .. as you play with my balls getting deeper and deeper as i feel my cock sliding down your throat .
Shit that feels so good as you gag on my cock the saliver dreuls from your mouth as you say *mmm i love your cock !
As i pull back your hair lean back and tell you *look at me , thats so fucking hot , as you look at me making me want to explode it feels like we been here for hours .. but whoa to know without any clock .
With the windows all steamed up , the tuck turned into a somewhat over with our body heat i crack open a window a little and then tell you to get up on all fours and hold on to the back headrest .
As a slide in you let out an ouch no ! Oops wrong hole sorry , after slapping you ass and sliding inside your sopping wet pussy once more i hold.onto your shoulders and destroy this pussy *my god this feels better then all the rest .
Your head turns to me as im fucking you hard *will you cum for me , i want your cum .. i cant take it much more give it to me .
I go all out and rest my hands palm down on the arch of your ass and lever against it liting myself of the chair and really plowing into you shitttt you scream , body shakes and falls flat into the seat as yiur body gives way to the pleasure whilst i sit rested on one knee .
With you spread flat on the trucks seat i sit just below your as over your legs holding firm youe cheaks spreading them out as i slide back in ..slow movements as you let out oh my god oh my god over and over .
Baby im gonna explode , you want my cum ? Where do you want it i say in a husky voice as i pull back your hair .. anywhere but inside me ! Give it to me now you reply as your juices are flowing all over my cover .
I turn you over so i can look into those eyes as im about to explode , thrusting inside you , seeing the pleasure on your face nothing beats it .
Oh god im about to cum for you , i pull out and start to rub my cock over your tits as your grab hold and say dont waste it !
You lean up and wank my veiny bulging cock as you open your mouth and rest it on your tongue mmm you say give me your big load as you gulp deep down once more .
You can feel my pulsate in your hand you know im close as you run your hand down my chest digging your nails in scratching down * oh fuck ! Im cumming .
As you empty my load into your mouth taking every drop still sucking hard as my body srtats to shuddering oh shit this is unreal .. im u dreaming .
Mmm you say after suckling every bit you fall to the seat in exctasy .. i was not expecting my night to end like this you said layn sweaty and sticky around the mouth .
After falling down myself out of breath we fall in each others arms talking about destiny and how good that was before talking about a little break before another trip down south .
We lay in each others arms breathless and talking about one an other as in the corner of the mirror a light flashes .. next minute there is beep * what the hell , its gotta be late ? .
As we get up look out the window another beep ! And in the blink of your eyes your back in your car half asleep with daylight dawning wrapped up in your drivers seat looking around but what happend to your hero date ? .
You look around rather dazed , was it all just a dream ..noooo you think to yourself that was amazing . Wait there is a truck parked infront .. they beeped is that him ?
A guy gets out .. please god please you start to think as a guy gets out its not him ! God damn you think to yourself as the guy walks over and says * you ok mamn ? Need some help looks like you need a new tyre and rim .
I can take you to the nearest garage if you like .. well he is rather cute you think not quite the man from your dream but who knows it could work out fine .
Never mind bby i was your dream in the end .. maybe one day we can make it a reality but until then remember the dream .. you was also mine

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
this is not a poem

please file this as a story and correct all the errors within- thanks