- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The End of Rain
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Click hereA brighter sky unfurls
gray to white. Dawn drifts
in from the grace of night
to precede a waking day
blowing pines greener
on the other side of pane.
Busy toes curl straight up
to smiles. Sweet patchouli
scents the air now passing
doors closing and opening.
- COMMENTS
My Erotic Taleabout 19 years agowell then your doors should be open unless your toes are busy doing something else <grin>
ozymandiaskabout 19 years agoBeautifully written as usual but Eve is kind about "other side of pane"
CupidsGurlabout 19 years agoI can just smell that fresh rain scent.
Wonderful Imagery.
errr...
Can I go splash in the puddles now?
WickedEveabout 19 years agoare usually so well written that even the slightest thing can throw me. In other words, I can't read your poetry without expecting perfection. The only line I'm iffy about is: on the other side of pane. I'm having a love/hate thingy with it.
