The Headland

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For a love lost
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KatieHoney
KatieHoney
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I stood on the headland this morning,
And called your name to the sea.
Hoping in vain for the wind to reach you,
And return with mine on its breath.

As the wind blew stronger I called again,
Then again and again as I fell to my knees.
My voice hoarse and by degrees dying,
From screaming so long at the sky.

The gulls mocked while I sobbed myself empty,
Until wearily I stood and trudged away.
Head bowed and broken hearted,
To return again tomorrow.

KatieHoney
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Paul4playPaul4play1 day ago

Beautiful!

The imagery and emotion are powerful.

The wind and gulls are very present.

The longing is painful.

Well done!

KatieHoneyKatieHoney3 days agoAuthor

Thank you for that amazing feedback Jorunn x

KatieHoneyKatieHoney4 days agoAuthor

Thank you Charlie x

JorunnJorunn4 days ago

You could be standing on the shores of Norway hoping the Viking men return from a raid, or on the ships of Holland waiting for the Dutch East Indies ships, or for all the British sailors when Brittania ruled the waves. Or perhaps, the Titanic? Or on any warships of any age. Or the family of Irish immigrant, wondering? Or, even today, with any lost love. Very universal and timeless.

CharlotteYM7CharlotteYM74 days ago

Heart wrenching and beautifully poignant Katie xxx

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