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Click here Algonquian summer
relief under thunder moon
mother's rain father's fury
bare consequences of both
I am fire and rain
Orbit thunder moon
season of my birth
parent of my soul
showers me with growth
jolts me with enlightenment
this was very enjoyable / i do not see the reason for the off-margin formatting, but that is not a large point
love the sparse language and independent, yet connected lines.
very cool--
thanks for playing :P
no thermo
speak as eloquently as Dusty..
But I agree, having read a little about Indian myth and lore this captures the spirit of their beliefs perfectly.
Everything is sacred, all is related and interdependent, and the answers you seek are all around you.
excellent poem...almost a prayer.
Thank you
Dear Sand,
This had such a First Nations feel to it that I could almost see the turquoise beads and see the head-dresses of porqupine quills.
Mii maanda niigaan da-ni-giizhgak ge-mno-aabjitooyan.
Be well, dear friend.
"mother's rain father's fury
bare consequences of both
I am fire and rain"
Though I wonder if in keeping with using "fire" in place of "fury", if there might be something to use in place of repeating "rain". Perhaps even the simple, Zodical water?