tagNon-Erotic PoetryTo My Anonymous Commenter

To My Anonymous Commenter

byavengerfive©

Gentle reader, oh how very far
You've come to damn me with 1 star.
I see that you don't share my kinks,
And thus opine, my story stinks.
My words were penned with great care, but
Did not help you to bust a nut.
Perhaps I'm just too erudite,
Or else, you're just not stroking right.
You say my writing's horrid fluff,
But you still stop to read my stuff,
And comment how you hate a cuck,
And how my wordsmithing doth suck.
But this one fact lessens the sting:
You haven't writ a God damn thing.

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by ImACuck01/14/18

Well Stated

Haters gonna hate.

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by OGHMNW01/13/18

Cute

A very cute way to reply to negative comments.

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by Jrunner1601/13/18

Awesome!

Just awesome! Way to go....

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by LEATBT01/12/18

Excellent!

The opinion of the majority of those who submit works hoping it will appeal to some.
The other option to gain a good result would be to write an interracial, anal, incest story based around the gardenmore...

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by greenmountaineer01/12/18

Made me chuckle. It helps me to imagine anons to be unemployed men living with their mothers in the basement who lock the door whenever they have their friends over for tea.

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