- Illustrated Poetry
- Tree Essence
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- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoAn interesting technique with most of the illustration composd of that single phrase repeated.
duddle146over 17 years agoAn illustration that appears vague and hardly readable. The format, though is highly unusual. Perhaps something experimental going on here.
twelveooneabout 19 years agoreminds me of the sixties; only not as good
didn't like the enjambment, it is more like enjamment
And I am going out of my way...
to be nice.
My Erotic Taleabout 19 years agoI see now! a very unique program indeed.
I will be looking forward to more <grin>
and I found the fishing for right words
was part of the excellent experience that
came from the viewing.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoI've never seen anything like this before. Very nice!!!!
--your pal, the blue squirrel
Rybkaabout 19 years agoAuthorAs mentioned in the TYPEDRAWiNG thread on the Poetry Forum, This was really just a first try with the software program, and I posted it so that those who couldn't get the site to work could get an idea of what I was talking about. Syndra Lynn is right, it is more an experiment in combining visual art and words than a finished poem (or drawing). But it shows the basic potential of the concept. - The words used were, "Pages are blank canvas for words" and "Tree essence".
A simple finished version might (as an example) contain the following:
Tree Essence
Trees are the essence
Pages are
just blank
canvas for ink
Words are the essence
Poetry is
>°)))><
WickedEveabout 19 years agoSubmit an edit with the poem repeated beneath the illustration. It would easier to read. If this illustration was bigger, then I could probably read it more easily. :)
