Try Anyway

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I tell her she is beautiful again and again
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JDDunne
JDDunne
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I tell her she is beautiful.
She tells me it's the lighting, or the angle, or the filter.
I tell her she is beautiful again and again,
hoping she believes me.
Her bright green eyes stop my heart and her kisses start it once more.
I died a thousand deaths the night we first made love;
the dead man I was born to be, but again and again she kissed me.

An evening rain
taps on the window quickening our racing hearts.
Her eyes locked with mine, warm pink lips purring my name.
I tell her she is beautiful.
Her smooth, flawless skin swimming in her locks of copper.
I kiss the freckles on her nose.
Her fingertips explore my chest.
I move in her and she moves with me.
My summer rain, my perfect storm.

We sit at the shore,
listening to the rain hiss and the waves break on the cool, pocked sand.
I hold her hand and tell her she is beautiful.
“How beautiful?” she asks.
“I would write a poem, if I was a poet.”
“Try anyway.”

She smiles.

JDDunne
JDDunne
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Satyr61Satyr619 months ago

Incredibly beautiful, very intoxicating. Dare I say SEXY?? Yes!!

Satyr61Satyr619 months ago

So lovely, sensual and touching. A true master poet with a beautiful way with words.

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnow9 months ago

You not only tried but succeeded in making this both a romantic and a sensual poetic piece. Thank you for sharing.

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