undo ki

"Engaged with doing what is left undone" — day dreaming? :-)

asshole over ^ pointy stick

the pungent Punji

un dookie? dooty free poetry zone over there-------->

How is it I never commented on this one? I remember reading and loving it before... I am sorry I missed it. I wonder if you ever come and read your comments. Post card: wish you were here right now.

your mastery of the minimal is astounding.awe-fully, yours

g_g

I think it is "is", doing implies present tense. TY. This is just fodder for what I thought was a neet bi-lingual play on words. Japanese - excersise breath, or something like that. Ki prononced the same as key, at least aroung here.

i love your line breaks, your stanza breaks, your succinct language. i find all, excellent. i do not doubt that you have each and every word exactly as you want it, but still find myself questioning 'is'. should it be 'was'? (my lack of education showing)

thank you for sharing your poetry and for giving me another level to seek.

wso

Works for me.

I've had too much to do to undo the undone. (or is that too much to do about nothing?) Seriously, this is one great poem. Masterfully done 1201

I 'truely' liked your poem but feel compelled to shorten it even more, (since you chose to keep it short) Haiku perhaps (grinin'