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caught
my breath
held for you
in the silence
the silvery dark
i have surrendered here
with these steps to the unknown
fear dripping from every quiver
a knot of desire tight in my chest
blind, i kneel, and hope to be unraveled
(3/16/2009; this is a titled form and consists of exactly ten lines, the first line having one syllable, each succeeding line adding a syllable, with a total count of fifty-five syllables)
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