What I Treasure

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I had no choice, in the beginning and so was I created in this nightmare.

To go to Heaven is to turn your back on having individual rights and to condone the torture of Hell is right.

I cannot turn my back on what I believe, Jehovah. How can a good God give in to his selfish nature to make such a place as Hell?

As long as Hell exists, I will stand against the almighty creator of us all. Character is greater than power, Jehovah you lack character or else Hell would not exist nor the Devil.

Everyday to me is more precious than gold, the pleasure I enjoy is more precious than silver.

Knowing I only have this life, at the end I will be tortured forever in Hell. Diamonds cannot gleam brightly enough compared to the feeling of being high or getting drunk.

The feeling of casual sex, the feel of a woman. These things I value over all the money in the World. Greed starves people and limits your heart.

Where is the World were we all care about each other? If every human alive can see as I see, we can beat Jehovah and demand a reform that's needed.

It would take all of us caring for one another before Jesus comes back.

Why couldn't Jehovah be happy with the countless numbers of angels who would curse me, even though I am calling for them to have individual rights like Jehovah enjoys himself.

I'm happy with the few friends I have? How many is enough for you, Jehovah? If you follow what you teach, I would have nothing to argue, I, myself choose to follow those things you teach.

Just like man, your not satisfied with what you have and need more. You can say your above man, Jehovah but actions always speak louder than words.

If you're truly good, Jehovah why not end this pointless game of sin, the fruit, and the Devil, which you could remove at any time.

You, yourself didn't have to prove a single thing to have individual rights, so why does your creation have to prove something you gained without a test?

You say you cannot change when you need to. Torture is wrong, I don't care who you are, you can't make that right.

If you were really good and there was no darkness in you as your Word says, there would be no Hell, no Devil, no tree.

If you follow what you teach, then your creation would have individual rights. I just see what your actions show, believing your Word and living in terror.

I can never condone the torture of Hell, if you above man, then how can you? Your not perfect, Jehovah! It's time for reform, n not more judgements against people who are just like you.

Absolute power corrupts absolutely. You prove that right, Jehovah. You cannot argue the truth I show.

Call me decieved, a liar, call me what you will. But, I don't see you tearing apart the truth I stand on which tears apart the Word which you stand on.

Your first mistake was Hell. And humans who had no choice, just live in your insane World pay the price everyday under our feet, screaming for mercy that will never come.

A good person wouldn't give in to the feelings you felt when you made Hell. You pervert justice and call what you do justice.

How you feel is more important than creation. For God so loved the World to bind us to his feelings by the cross, to put to an end how we feel.

No created being has individual rights, only you Jehovah. Hell is not justice, but personal. Just like the flood when you drownded humans like rats.

No apologies, we must feel worthy of you? If you were in my shoes, I would call you a fool to agree with such tyranny, blindly.

So, how am I decieved by your puppet the Devil? When I see a I am making a sane choice to not stand for a kingdom of torture? Your actions speak louder than words.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
My Heartfel Advice

My advice for you to take, on you're on volition, is that you privately speak with God and pray to him, for the answers you're heart seeks. Those who ask of God are never without an answer.

I understand you're frustration but I don't think this is the appropriate place to share these kinds of feelings. If you need an outlet try praying, mediating, journaling or confiding in someone you trust.

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