- Erotic Poetry
- When Submissives Pray
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Her submissives pray for release tonight.
Their Goddess nods and gives them this advice
To smile and suck a cock for her delight.
They kneel and offer anything that might
Be worthy, as a perfect sacrifice.
When submissives pray for release tonight.
No other fad or fetish will ignite
Her flames of passion; naught else will suffice.
Just smile and suck a cock for her delight.
She sets the scene with subtle candle light,
And roses for the trip to Paradise,
When submissives pray for release tonight.
Your mistress hopes to soothe her appetite
For debauchery. So she will entice
Them smiling, suck a cock for her delight.
They’ll see the beauty of their tripartite
Encounter and indulge this wicked spice.
When submissives pray for release tonight,
They'll smile and suck a cock for her delight.
- COMMENTS
MargotPayge10 months agoAuthorVillanelles are easy to conceptualize, but, in my opinion anyway, really hard to make work. The rhymes can get tedious. This one is probably my most successful to date. I read it after a few weeks and I still actually like it.
