- Illustrated Poetry
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- COMMENTS
KOLKOREalmost 17 years agoIt is a case where I felt that the text was illustrating this stunning visual.
LeBrozalmost 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.
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LeBrozabout 17 years agoWonderful juxtaposition with a feeling that at times the illustration dominates and suddenly the text takes over.
duddle146over 17 years agoI especially loved the last line, "Serenity graces the night."
The last line has such a peaceful feel to it.
twelveooneabout 19 years agoI am not ordinarily a fan of "illustrated", this is well done.
1 question, why are the moral dilemmas obvious?
Anonymousabout 19 years ago...when it appeared in the PDF and loved it. I still do, it's all the more impressive that it's a first!
Tess
Anonymousabout 19 years agoIllustrated poems put forward an interesting problem of how to avoid either the image or the text illustrating the other rather than both elements being in parallel and essential to the whole.
Good poem.
b'brig
Angelineabout 19 years agoThis is a great first effort at an illustrated poem--good fit with the image and the poem is wonderful. I enjoyed it in the Picture This thread and seeing it here, too. :) Ange
