Who do I Judge Wrong?

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Your Word says taste and see that the Lord is good. Unfortunately I tasted and found the opposite. If the words I say build a house you cannot tear down, Jehovah then how do I judge wrong?

Do you what you want to this powerless worm that I am, it only shows me that like man is driven by his lusts, then so are you.

You cannot tear down the truth I see, you avoid by saying I'm just man.


My awnser is your delusional for not seeing your like than the man you judge.

Hell makes me not want to be holy like you, just because you can create such a place like that, I don't want to be anything like you, Jehovah. I see your actions and want to be different. To care enough about an enemy Who has no choice, but to be what you need.

If it is true, that you can defeat the Devil at anytime, then why is he still roaming free and all the people he decieved are burning beneath our feet?

You haven't even proven me wrong about the Devil being controlled by you, because you needed an enemy to make your tyranny right.

If I, as a stupid human could see the damage I could do to you as the Devil by being the opposite of what you say about me, then how come he hasn't caught on with the centuries he has existed?

Hell was created for him, this puppet you follows your every command. I see the Word as how you play games with humanity instead of being for real.

Then there would be no commandments needed, no reason to die in a cross, no tree in the garden. If you truly were all you claim to be, we would see it ourselves.

Because what you would do would be different than what your Word decrease.

It is because of what your Word says, I judge righteously in saying your just like the man you drownded like rats in the flood.

Your just like every man you sentence to Hell, caring about being the great I Am over your creation. I see nothing selfless about what you do.

Just like man, your selfish, wanting man to prop up your ego without deserving such devotion. You cannot argue that if you were just as me, you wouldn't come to the same conclusion.

No reform, means you only care about yourself, Jehovah. If you say I judge unrightously, then I dare you to tear down, just 1 single agruement I make. You avoid to stay blind to what you want to see, just like man, there is no difference.

The only difference is you have The power to abuse. When I die, at least I will be tortured forever for what is right. Standing against torture, seeing you for who you really are, Jehovah.

Just like man you want what you want and abuse your power to get it.

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