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Chelsea felt the swoon of post-orgasm ecstasy fade, and her grip on reality return. She turned around slowly, facing the man. I thought I knew you she thought at him.

'Dean...' She had no idea what to say. The silence extended.

Finally, Dean spoke for her; 'You didn't say the safe word.' He observed.

Was that... awe, in his voice just now?

Dean's eyes were large and twinkling and Chelsea was surprised she didn't feel the urge to look away.

'No.' she responded simply.

'I never intended to share those photos with anyone.' He explained.

'I know.' And Chelsea did know. She had known the whole time.

'But you still didn't make me stop.'

Because I've never been more turned on in my life... Chelsea said nothing.

'You enjoyed that didn't you? Maybe even more than I did, I think...' Dean smiled cheekily. Chelsea lowered her head. Her cheeks were growing warm again.

'...How did you know?' How did he know I liked it? How did he know that would turn me on? Chelsea's voice was quiet, but the enclosed space enabled Dean to hear her words.

'Well, I kind of stumbled across your reddit account...' His smile was wide.

Reddit? No, he can't have. I'm completely anonymous...

But he went on. 'you posted a picture on Facebook, and then I saw the exact same one on reddit, on the Australia subreddit, and I knew it had to be your account. I snooped on your subscriptions. Con-non-con? Strugglefuck? Seemed like your kinks matched mine to a tee!'

You're fucking shitting me. Her stomach was doing little flips. She suddenly noticed how little strength remained in her knees. Dean must have noticed because he took hold of her again. The hot water pattered over her shoulders.

'Truth be told, I couldn't resist a little snooping though. I can't remember how long I've had the hots for you.'

No. fucking. Way. He's teasing me, making fun of me. He found out my darkest secrets and... and...

'But... Carly?' Chelsea didn't think she had ever been so confused.

Dean threw his head back and laughed heartily. His perfect teeth flashed. 'Oh, we're not actually married!' He said nonchalantly. 'She's a lesbian. We pretend to be married so her family would stop harassing her. She's a good friend though.'

Chelsea just stared.

.. what??

'We don't even live together,' Dean continued. 'We keep up appearances when we're back in town, so her folks don't catch on, but other than that, we just hang out with the same group of Uni mates. She's a great chick, but she could care less about me being with you. Except maybe being a tad jealous of me.' Dean winked. 'She thinks you're super cute'.

The warmth in Chelsea's cheeks progressed to hot. She knew she just turned from pink to bright red. Dean stole a kiss, leaving just a slight wetness on Chelsea's lips. 'You really are too adorable' he remarked.

I have to be dreaming.

'Stay the night' Dean half offered, half demanded. Ever the one in charge. 'I want to hear why you didn't use the safe word. And I think we could have a bit more fun.' His eyes flashed darkly, and Chelsea knew she wouldn't refuse. She nodded her agreement.

'Good girl' Dean said again, smiling.

Chelsea smiled too.

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CharlieCastillo9CharlieCastillo9over 2 years ago

The best stories are the ones where the girl is innocent and doesn't like sex, she just testifies.

OneBigFishOneBigFishover 2 years ago

Oh this is a great story so far! I can't wait to keep reading this!! I Rarely leave comments. But this one is perfect!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

okay so time for constructive criticism

what i hated about this story:-

1) NO LUBE ANAL IS PURE CRUEL,INHUMANE,BRUTAL-SHES A FUCKING ANAL VIRGIN DUDE SHE WILL BLEED

i have nothing against rough anal

but good amount of lube must be used ,its a turn off for me many literotica authors would either consider saliva or only vaginal fluids enough but its not especially when its about taking someones anal virginity

2)stop the hype up of anal you are overestimating it anal sex does hurts especially the first time stop lying to readers that it doesnt hurt many readers here are thinking about having anal sex and your oversetimation puts them to a bitter truth when they would feel pain in their ass

putting cock in some tight ass might feel heaven but taking one is a hell especially first time and with only saliva as the author is suggesting you will end up in hospital getting your torn bleedy asshole and intestine stitched up

please be real when it comes to anal sex its not vaginal its not self lubricating you have to have lube so that the wetness last longer for a less pain and more pleasurable experience

3)whats the point of safe word if there was a blackmail as a consequence - i mean did he want to test her submission to him? or did he ever intend to know she actually might not want it and want to back off ( leaving the possibility of him knowing her con non con fetish)

4) anal to vagina while finguring and anal play - its wrong he is gonna give her pussy some fungal infection or uti

5)very less anal dilation - he should had used two or three fingures as its her first time

now what i loved about this

everything it is one of the hottest reluctance story put on here

1)HUMILIATION - it was so hot when he mocked her when he demanded her answer to wink during the deepthroat bj wow

then when he asked her to come from him fucking her ass making her admit that she loves to those dirty whores who only come when there ass is fucked by anyone she admits to become that dirtiest whore for him when she comes only from pure anal with no vaginal or clittoral simulation i loved her degradation

all fare in love and war

afterall he loves her despite being the dirty whore and she loves him he loves for her sluttiness and depravity hmm dirty but romantic pure beautiful submission to her man

2)the scissor play oh you got me there it was so naughty and methodical perfect how he rip her naked to serve him hmmm sexy

3) the orgasm denial 3 times woooo

good one she could only come when he fucks her in the ass rest all he denied her awsome he established and planted the seed in her mind that she will be his future anal whore oh i feel so hot

really awsome story i would have actually given it a 5 if only he was considerate about her enough to use some last longing lube afterall she is an anal virgin and solely going to be his how can he so carelessly injure her intestine and rectum he needs to be thoughtful if he wants her to be his anal whore further he cant continues if she keeps on bleeding she might not feel pain as she is aroused but her rectum and intestine is really going to be torn if good amount of lube us not used

so no lube no 5 star

4 star for one of the hottest story here

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Soo hot!!

This was amazing!! I came multiple times reading this. Felt like I was there!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
looking forward to part 2!

Please write more. Don't leave us hanging. So well written and so HOT. Please publish part 2 of the beginning. As a Christmas present maybe?

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