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Click hereI needed to taste his cock. I quickly threw him back and slid myself down. I licked it up and down, savoring the taste of it. I could barely fit the whole thing in my mouth as it began to grow to it's full size again. In no time, I was pumping my face up and down the shaft of my brother’s cock, when I suddenly felt him grab me and pull me up. I knew what he wanted, so I spun myself around and rested my pussy on his face. It took a few minutes for him to find his “groove”, but he eventually found it, and ate my pussy to another glorious orgasm. Soon after, his cock exploded in my mouth, sending what felt like gallons of hot cum down my throat.
I needed to feel him inside me. Before his dick had a chance to get soft, I was sliding my self on top of it. It stretched me to the point where it almost hurt. Soon he was sliding in and out of me easily. We fucked for what seemed like hours, rocking my body with so many orgasms, I lost count. It was late by the time we fell asleep.
When I woke up next to my brother the next morning, and felt his hard cock pressed against my ass, and his strong arms holding me tightly, the only regret I had was that we didn’t do this sooner.
Anne, a truly great story. I use to fantasize about my stepsister and this brought back all the fond memories!
Sounds like something that almost happened to me when I was younger. It's too bad it didn't happen. Anyways, the story was great, and I give you 2 thumbs up and a 5 star rating. Please, keep writing.. don't ever stop. *favorites this story*
A beautiful story. You described his ejaculation so vividly, it's hard to believe you're a lesbian!
This is the very first of your stories that I've read, but you can bet your sweet ass it won't be the last.
Write more!
Matt
Could write more about how they make soft, gentle and tender love, between bros and sis... would be amazing...
It's interesting sometimes how we come to love someone, that special person that we'd like to spend the rest of our life with. When it's your sister, it becomes difficult to let her (or anyone else) know. I think you did an admirable job in describing the relationship between the brother and sister.
Hopefully you'll continue the story whenever you return to writing. Take care!
this was such a great story after I read it I went and seduced my brother for the first (but not last) time. I just couldent help myself.
There was far more build-up to Anne's brother spying on her and her friend than there was dedicated to fleshing out him pumping his load and especially lacking detail when the two of them are in his bed.
The biggest draw to this story is the discussion between Stacey and Anne, about Anne's brother being a hermit + spying from above. That premise and that part was well done. Do the same with developing the sex. We got all this build up and it's pretty nicely detailed up until Anne leaves the room p.o.'ed. It's when she returns to sleep with him that all the detail's missing and it needs a lot more work. It's like "ok, let's get it over with" to the reader--although the characters clearly want to explore further. Reflect what the characters want and what the rest of your story promised to do initially.
eh... it was a very interesting story.... but just wasnt long enough...... or too detailed... but it was still an ok story... better en' most... keep up the good work! sincerely, coty.
Vrey nice! You were on your way to a 5, but when it came to a description of the sex, you rushed it. More details, please. He had a 7" cock, but what about the rest of him? What did the sister look like? How did she feel when he came for her? A nice beginning, though, and the dialogue wasn't bad at all! Just more details, please, and by all means, keep writing. I think you'll only get better! - Jim Dandy 66 P.S. As to your being a lesbian: As long as everyone involved is of legal age, no one should have a problem with it, and you shouldn't give a flying fuck if they do! As long as you're happy with your sex life, that's all that matters!
Started out great, had a good plot and every thing, then in the end, when it came to the oral sex and actual sex, it seems like you just gave up and wanted to go ahead and finish.