by Dinsmore
"Hell, I learned to become an equal opportunity hugger, male or female, when they came back looking beat up, they got a hug."
Absolutely amazing. The non erotic nature of the scene was so tension heavy that I was able to cum. Beautiful, don't see work like this everyday. Will be remembering that wank for a while
Amazing story, really enjoyed reading it. I look forward to reading the rest of your work. All the best, Meduckies.
a Far better quality read than I expected to see on here. Very enjoyable: Be sure to let us know when your novel develops.
Hard to find a better story more realistic than many and more human a few more stories as this would be all the better for Literotica
A great story.
I got more out of it the second or is it the third read?
Thank you again.
As a former military aviator (USAF, O-3, Nam, F-4), retired Exec. VP working under a female president (my wife!), let me compliment you on an excellent story.
I really wished you had continued this story! It is a great story with outstanding people in it!!! You had laid the story in a very good plot that I really enjoyed. Thank you!
I would say this was a very lovely story but I would los some man points so I'm forced to say, this was an excellent story. 5 stars and no criticisms from me.
Excellent commentators have already said everything necessary. (Needed hug for the Captain)
1) Amazing and so true to life it reads like and article in a business magazine.
2) For those who are unaware as maybe even the person saying it: POMY (really POME but usually with a Y) is usually slany for a British person living in another commonwealth nation.
I love this story so much. It reminds me why people fall in love, why i fell in love.
It's funny, this story is rather light on romance. It has no erotica whatsoever but every time I read it, I am desperate for my husband to just tell me that he loves me and let me know that I am still his number one. I am not even remotely insecure in our relationship or in myself... my desirability. It's more, I love him so much. I know he loves me and wants me. There is no question. It's just... there are certain times when emotions are high and I need to have that special moment when stars align: that moment when a couple forget everything else and simply share a perfect moment of love and lust.
More than likely I will probably have to make my intentions clear. After all, Tommy isn't a mind reader. He has no idea I read this (though he knows how it makes me feel) sometimes though, my man can be pretty in tune with me. Those are the absolute best nights. I will trade making love enhanced by extreme emotion with straight sexual release fucking any day.
This site likes the stories where hard fucking, ravishing, bla bla bla is the best sex. That's awesome too but no way would I trade the bliss from the above for anything.
Lol, it is an advantage to be a woman today incorp world. Promoted just for the appearance.
The worst bathers of women in Corp world are other women. Vicious. Cannot stand be see other women succeed.
Another wonderful story by this author. Looking forward to reading many more.
Whatever spell was cast, able to utterly enrapture people enough to garner 4.8 rating, it must have missed me by a mile. This, as an objective, academic-grammatic writing submission is pretty solid. This as a STORY is just a dry, stiff recounting of an event. The entire composition, and any character at any point, is just the exact same dull, meandering exposition, over and over. No variance in attitude, expression, delivery, tone- just the same droning from a different character name, multiple times. As sterile as an egg yoke. Q
I just had to read this excellent story, yes a story, again. Excellent character development and an insight to corporate ideas. Having served in a public service as well as the military it was a refreshing insight. I hope your wife found it useful.
This was more a discussion about corporate leadership than a story. Not what I was looking for.
Thank you for this very pleasant story with a happy ending. My only criticism is the problems were very innocuous and hardly problematic at all. It would up the level of intensity in your story. Maybe a baseless indecency complaint? solved easily by him getting permission to have a hidden camera in his office. Once a man is accused of any improper behaviour it's a stigma that is attached to your soul. It's why and how women have the power ATM.
There are a lot of technical issues with this story, on several levels. I just couldn't get immersed. I'd be happy to help with the military information that you need to incorporate to get closer to accurate.
who cares about the tech military issues. this a great tale. since when has the military been perfect.
how many killed in the wars band police actions around the world because of screw ups.
5 stars
Enjoyed the STORY, rated 5.
I tried to see what Pickles7287 stories were like, to compare, but there were NONE. Guess he is a "want to be" full of BS.
It says non-erotic, but it is a wonderful Romance wrapped around so rat corporate wisdom.
A Must Read!