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Click here"Come on," she said standing up and taking me by the hand. "I'm going to show you the way."
"What do you mean show me the way?"
"I didn't realize it, until I got here. I didn't realize it, until now. I didn't know, until, suddenly, everything feels, as if I've done all of this before, de ja vu."
"What do you mean?"
"I didn't know when I accidentally killed you, but everyone here, you and even me, are dead. We're all dead and we're all ghosts. I died in that car accident with you, which is why we were naked, why we were both naked. It's ironic that the man that I never met in life, I finally met in death," she said pushing me back on the bed, before fucking my brains out and making me cum over and again.
This ghost stuff isn't bad. For sure, the first time I'm celebrating Nude Day, this is the best sex that I've ever had with a woman dead or alive. Just as I've never had a partner in life, now I have one in death. Andy and I are a couple, until...the next step do we part.
"Happy Nude Day."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 7 years agoTitle says it all. Too long on the build up. The horrificness of the scene was okay. But there was absolutely not enough graphic sexual descriptive, and not enough setup from her side.
Keep at it. There is potential there.
gperry2843over 11 years agoThat's all I'm gona say. You got a 5. (Yeah I'm as dumb as I sound)
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoI've read a few of your stories. You seem, to me, to spend pages on the introduction and the beginning. I find, what seems to me, the same thing written 2 or 4 different ways. Very little space to the middle and the end of the stories. I suggest you severely cut the first parts and significantly expand the middle and the ends.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoYou really built up the story I never expected that ending until the ending
Very entertaining and sexy You were very descriptive about the accident
I was going ah that is nasty Nicely done
datadynalmost 14 years agoI wish it was the end of your writing, you writing is crap really
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoJust kidding Susie Q.
I do wonder though if you could explain why you have so many stories entered in the contest. Shouldn't each contestant just enter one? That seems fairer to me. We could compare your best with the best of other authors. Then each reader would vote, helping to select the eventual winner.
Unless the authors name is D.K.MOON in which case he's too important a person to allow mere readers to vote!
Another point: when you submit your story there is no need to leave the teaser under the title in the actual story presentation. "A naked woman kills a man on Nude Day in a hit and run accident" is what you left in this time. Better without it!
Otherwise not a bad story. I think this is your second best of the eight entries you've made so far.
Laurel in Oregon
