A REALLY Scary Halloween

Fantasy at its finest. So surreal. Not really plausible. But, enjoyable. 😊

Well, I was really liking the buildup and description as the girls were being turned into slave girls. The humiliation of running through the town naked was fantastic. The ending ended too soon however. We could have been taken through the branding of the girls. What really happened to the girls that were let loose? Did they get back to the hotel safely? I was kind of hoping that the women would be taken up to the branding stage and then branded with a slight touch of the brand, so that it would not leave too much of mark that would fade with some time. The girls could have been then rounded up, hooded, and taken back to the hotel. After waking up, they would learn that they did go through the slave experience and hopefully they would understand what happens. We find that the old walrus did have a vasectomy and did not breed Susanne but she does not find out until much later. If so many girls went missing at one time plus if any of the girls that were released actually said anything, hopefully the families and police would come after them. Overall a very good story but would have liked to have the girls really come to their senses and realize that slavery was not all good stories like romance novels.

Some of the best buildup in any story I've read. I wish the payoff had been proportionate to the anticipation, though. Ironically, the buildup was so good that what would otherwise have been a really strong ending almost felt anticlimactic.

I still loved this story regardless. Really fantastic work.

One of the best stories I've read on this site. Absolutely NEEDS a part 2!

Been to a few parties where people seemed stuck up at first but once the Party turned to more Sex and drinking was going on the people loosened up alot more. Just like some the girls and the Prof we all have to learn to obey our Masters or we get punished. I've had Mens that was Doms and Masters use everything from there hand spanking me across they laps to using the belts to some places they carried riding crops to use on me or us Sister Slaves and subs to putting them IN us when they inspected us. I soon learned how to present my self to a Man and Master when his hands went to my Breasts or started Down my tummy to my Pussy I learned quick to open these white legs of mine specialy if it was a Black Dom or Master.

Some parties I was at the Subs and Slaves were auctioned off for the night to the Doms and Masters and we either got taken there or could go to a Motel or back with the Man who bought us.

congratulations, you're the best!

Please tell us what happens to the prof!

without a doubt, one of the greatest stories I have ever read, I am hanging on for a sequel, wonderful!

The story was constructed really well, and kept pulling you in just like Abdul was pulling the girls in. I did, however, think that it ended rather abruptly, (partly because page 8 was just one paragraph due to formatting) and I kept waiting for the Professor to get with Abdul. Indeed, I thought that was what was going to happen in the scene where she sucks his cock. That bit felt a little out of character for her by that point in the story. Still loved the whole thing.

Wish I was one of the girls

Really need to visit africa

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The girls will be domesticated into slaves for black women who will humiliate them by disciplining their ass if they do not do a good job sucking black cock or fucking back when they are being fucking.

For Taylor, she will have a hell of a slavery as she gets her tongue split and is made to lick the dirty piss from black womens pussies.d And get her ass tattooed to list her owned by black people forever. Her friends will hate her and they will be subjected to painful discipline upon receiving notification from Taylor that they are bad.

I loved the clever, deliberate way Abdul lured the women into his trap and the liberal, perfectly timed humor interspersed throughout the story. MARVELOUS READ.

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I loved the attention to detail throughout. The slow pace combined with Abdul’s wordplay was chilling. All of the girls were idiots and none were redeemable. The story is a letdown because of the ending. There needs to be a resolution where she is branded and packed away. The story doesn’t end here until she’s on her way to her new master. It’s basically stated they’re all going to remain slaves forever.

Quality: the first half is polished. Lots of errors on pages 6 and 7.

Truly a favourite author! I enjoy the forced breeding, the build up and acceptance of the trickery involved in sealing their own deserved fate and and fulfilment of their underlying desire. Reality often is a let-down as we only know too well likeif we try to relive a holiday romance.

A well written entralling story that surely deserves a sequel. Just what does Slave-girl Suzanne (if that is still the fire pussy ex-Professor's slave name) brand portray? Is she freed from her physical slavery but not of her desires? Does she carry the Colonel's bastard child, bringing even more value to her marked-as-owned pearly white slave arse? What of the other meretricious vixens and their fates? Surely many deserve to be bred by the blacks that they despise even though the family fortunes were made from such; to have piccininny run at their sides and suckling their white slave-girl breasts as a constant reminder of their societal position? Surely a physical return but a non-acceptance into Western High Society leaving them and their bastard mulattos as lowly servants to their own wealthy relatives could be fitting for some. The wooden yokes removed, but what of their replacement collars; the pierced adornment to nipples, clitoris, labia; the anklet and bracelet cuffs and any other modifications an owner may wish to visit upon a chattel to bring pleasure to an owners eye, pleasure through infliction of pain, or utility for drawing a cart, pulling a plough, or sexual pleasure such as excising the clitoral hood?

I look forward in anticipation.

Mean The Professor. She's smart and knowledgeable. Unlike the spoiled coeds she's chaperoning on a trip to some of Africa's less inviting countries, she lacks the pretentious superiority and thinly concealed racism of her charges. Prof deals gingerly and politely with their native guide Abdul who is an inveterate liar and story teller. It's Halloween and the girls want to play trick or treat by visiting the local slave market. To get there all must strip bare and surrender their valuables. Even the Prof gets herself coaxed to go along. Once the trick of beguiling them to undress and remove jewellery is executed, the treat is that they are to be treated and sold as slaves. The Prof is robustly raped by a white man to produce valuable offspring for market. Branded, photographed and sold, the ladies are promised that they will be offered for re-sale to their fathers or to a church group that sponsored the trip. The story is long but the pace is brisk. The erotic elements fit and complement the story line. The social comment of the reception Americans and Europeans would face elsewhere is terrifyingly accurate.