All Comments on 'A Sibling Survival Story Ch. 01'

To people still making votes in the comments: THE AUTHOR CLOSED THE VOTING CHOICES 5 YEARS AGO AND WROTE CHAPTER TWO!!!! Geezus!

But on an editorial note:

"The fire outside kept smothering for little while longer before it completely died out."

I think that the word that you wanted to use was smoldering, not smothering.

I liked your unique approach to writing a series with the branches being voted on. 5/5

"A Sibling Survival Story Ch. 01:" - A few minutes before midnight (11:58 PM EDT) of October 27, 2023, the voting is long over. This one (1) page "chapter" IS rather short, and not, most certainly, very fulfilling. On to Chapter 02 where the sibling's love, or otherwise, affair continues...hopefully! Just for the record, I would have chosen option "A" as I'm much more a fan of incest than exploration in ancient caves--or worse.

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