A Smart Set Of Cheaters

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As she reached for the item he was handing her Don began talking again. He said, "Jasmine I'm down here groveling at your feet. I'm begging you. Will you marry me? You have put the sunshine back into my life and I'm only happy now when I'm with you."

Just as Jasmine's fingers touched the box her mind deciphered what Don was saying. She closed her hands over the box and said, "What? Did you say...?"

Jasmine opened the small box and saw a beautiful ring nestled in the interior. Her mouth dropped open. She gasped and held her empty hand to her mouth. Then she slowly removed the ring from its container. In slow motion she looked at it then began sliding it onto her left ring finger. Tears were streaming down her cheeks. She dropped to her knees and gave Don a deep, long, sensuous kiss. "Yes," she moaned. "Oh yes. I love you with all my heart and I've dreamed for months that you loved me too."

The house broke out in whistles and catcalls. When Jasmine came up for breathe she saw Don's entire family gathered around. Don's brother pulled her to her feet and hugged her then she was passed from person to person as they hugged and congratulated the happy couple.

Jasmine set a June wedding. Over the intervening months she slowly moved her things from her small apartment into Don's home.

At the reception after the wedding Don and Jasmine were opening the gifts. Buried at the bottom of the pile was a lone, yellowed envelope. Inside was a heart shaped valentine that seemed as old as the envelope. The original signature had been erased. It looked like it might have been Don. Written on the valentine were the words, "I received this valentine from the only man I ever loved on our first valentines day. I have treasured it ever since. Somehow it seems appropriate I pass it on to you now. Perhaps it is a symbolic passing on of his heart from me to you. May the rest of your life be filled with love and consideration for one another. May you never break the other's heart or let foolish pride tear you apart. Congratulations. I wish you both a life of love and happiness. With all my love Victoria."

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321 Comments
bacchant2bacchant2about 2 months ago

Good story although a bit typical with the relationship of the mc and the other mans wife. A new relationship with the ex might have been more logical.

Didnt quite understand what the adulterers were trying to achieve, it supposedly wasnt for the sex so having got away with it a few times why keep going. But i understand it was just a story, just not altogether logical..

ChuckyLaFongChuckyLaFongabout 2 months ago

Good story, well written although somewhat non sensible plot.

Busman19639Busman196394 months ago

The best response to her affair is to have a life well lived going forward.

BabalooieBabalooie4 months ago

SECOND READ Well done Five Stars

oldtwitoldtwit5 months ago

Bit of a chick story, I liked the plot and the characters were going on real.

Kernow2023Kernow20235 months ago

Right ending , no way could she be forgiven and trusted

rbloch66rbloch666 months ago

I kinda feel bad for Victoria. She was too smart for her own good, and too stupid to realize what she could lose.

She worked at being right rather than being happy. It’s a shame.

a_reader_from_germanya_reader_from_germany6 months ago

Thanks for an enjoyable read, I agree with all the commentators who are satisfied with the way this played out (divorce). The cheating spouse can repeat "I love you" over and over, it doesn't matter. First of all, the faithful, betrayed party has no reason to believe that statement, and secondly love as in infatuation is not enough to make a marriage work. On the other hand, under the circumstances depicted here, I don't think the female MC does love her husband. My personal believe is that a long lasting love is only possible on the basis of friendship, founded on trust, sympathy, respect and on having similar values and priorities in life.

The cheating wife in this story was planning, scheming and betraying for six years- just to make a point and to prove to be more clever than Don. By doing all that she violated a whole number of the above mentioned preconditions for a committed monogamous partnership.

Thanks again to the author for this offering, I read it for the second or third time now, gave it 5 stars way back when and stand by it.

Oatmeal1969Oatmeal19697 months ago

my difficulty with this story is deciding if it was good or great. Thanks!

"Can't you forgive me?"

"forgive you for being so stubborn that you had an affair that lasted six years to prove a flippant hypothesis AND you got more excitement from feeling vindicated and the secrecy rather than the sex?"

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