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Click hereI thought I would try a little different style of writing. This whole story is just speak between mother and son. No details or visuals, just pain speech. Let me know what you think...
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Me- Fuck I can't believe my hami went! I hope I don't miss too many games.
Mom- Hey don't be using that kind of language. I am sure you will be fine for the next one
Me- Well I sure hope so. Coach said scouts from SC are supposed to be there. Man I would love to play in Cali.
Mom- I know you do.
Me- What's wrong Mom? Why are you saying it like that?
Mom- Well I just don't want my handsome boy to be leaving so soon. I wish you would get an offer from Michigan State or the Wolverines so you could stay here.
Me- I know Mom I will try. But if this groin doesn't get better I might be screwed for any shot.
Mom- Well let me see what I can do. Here lie down on your bed and let me get some baby oil.
Me- Okay.
Mom- Hey you are gonna have to take those shorts and underwear off if I am going to rub that groin of yours.
Me- Uhhh you sure Mom?
Mom- Jesus Johnny I am your mother. Besides you don't have anything I haven't seen before. I used to change your diapers all the time.
Me- I think I have changed quite a bit since those days Mom!
Mom- Whatever... do you want to get better or what?
Me- Ya....there you go.
Mom- Holly Shit! Opps sorry son didn't mean to say that out loud but you are right you have change!
Me- Okay Mom now you are embarrassing me!
Mom- I am sorry honey but you sure don't take after your father!
Me- Uhh what do you mean Mom?
Mom- Well let's just say he wouldn't measure up to half of you!
Me- Wow really? Cool! Oh your hands are cold Mom!
Mom- Sorry, they will only be that way for a few seconds. Here let me rub your legs a little.
Me- OOHH that feels good now. Keep rubbing right there. I can feel it loosening up.
Mom- Spread your legs a little wider I need to get right in there. Oh my, is my rubbing doing that to you?
Me- MOM! I am sorry; it just has a mind of its own sometimes.
Mom- Nothing to be sorry about, in fact I am flattered. Here let me check something here.
Me- Oh shit mom...oh god you are Jesus that feels good.
Mom- OOOHHH Johnny your cock is so thick and hot in my hand. You are going to make some girl happy with this!
Me- Well Ohhh Yesss ... you are making me happy right now. Yes that feels good when you stroke it like that mom. Much better than when I do it.
Mom- You like Mommy stroking your cock? Mmm I like doing it too. You know I rub my pussy all the time. Here let me get out of these clothes so I can rub myself while I rub you.
Me- Holy smokes mom you are hot! You complete shave your pussy! That is so awesome.
Mom- You know what would be more awesome?
Me- What?
Mom- If you would lick my pussy for me.
Me- Yes mom you taste so good. Your pussy is so wet.
Mom- Yessss Baby lick momma like that! Oh God You are gonna make me cum! Yes right fucking there. Lick your momma's pussy....IIII"MMMM CCCCUUMMMIIINGG!
Me- Wow that was hot Mom! My face is covered in your sweet juice.
Mom- Yes, Baby that was incredible. You must have been practicing for quite sometime to get that good. Who is the lucky girl?
Me- Mom I am actually a virgin and I have never eaten out a chick before you. That was a first for me.
Mom- My baby is a natural born pussy eater. Mmmm I like that. And you say you're a virgin too? Well we better do something about that quick! Mmm Baby get behind me while I get on my knees here and fuck me from behind. I want to feel every inch of your wonderful cock.
Me- Oh God Mom your pussy is so hot and wet on my cock I don't think I can last that long.
Mom- I don't care just fuck me as hard and fast as you can. Come on Baby fuck Momma's hot cunt. Let me feel all your warm cum shooting deep inside me.
Me- Oh God Mom here it cums. I am cumming right up your pussy. Yess, Yesssss, YEEESSSSS!!!!! Oh God I love you Mom.
Mom- I am cumming with you Baby, yes my baby boy is making me cummmmmmmm! Oh I love you too sweety.
Love it when I am ready for a new experience in the world of the forbidden fruit and erotic feel of the mother fuckers I now. A must have for the sweet and erotic incest you are amenable to. I love being a cross dresser and mother fucking bitch.
That was pretty hot. But it was brief. Id love to hear that story expanded in great detail, and then record an audio to go with it. Because I love the sound of your voice.
I lost interest so fast, it wasn't even funny!
This style doesn't work at all in this case!
I can't understand what all the grumpy nay-sayers are yapping about. This is an unusual yet very pleasing vignette of hot motherfucking. When his mother pulls down her boy's shorts to massage his groin she gasps, "Holy shit!" He'd warned her that he's grown a lot, but his mother is still stunned and delighted by the fat meaty prick her boy's got swinging between his strong young legs. There are plenty of mothers, probably most of them, who'd love to take a good look at how big their son's dick has grown now that he's in his late teens. It's the most natural thing there is, mothers have a strong affection for what makes their darling boy a boy. Here the mother can't keep her hands off her son's big prick and he quickly gets hard ("Show it hard for mom!" as boys joke among themselves). After the son slurps his mother's tasty twat, "Yum!" he grins, mom invites him to revisit the cunt he came out of--now with his man-sized dick! The story mirrors the quick spontaneity of a boy shoving his stiff prick up his "momma's hot cunt" whenever he's given the chance. He's got a pair of hot young balls loaded to the brim, he's dying to give his rich semen to his beloved mother, right up between her legs. Where else does a boy's potent young sperm belong but up his own mother's twat?
DO NOT WRITE LIKE AGAIN. Total waste of space. Just...NO!
Truly awful!
I have lost hope in ever expecting a story worth reading from you on the subject of mom & son.
No one in today's time speak's in this stilted manner. The use of contractions is the common practice today. I'm instead of I am, you're instead of you are, we're instead of we are, etc. It's too difficult to read your story, It's not real!
Take some time to develop the story, then write it with correct grammer, content, and character development. It has real potential, but not the way it's written. The "critic" that said "See Dick fuck, see Jane suck" has you pegged, try to be a little more creative.