All Comments on 'A Touch of Grace'

lost a niece at 5 1/2 years old. she had brain cancer didn't have a name for it then but now it's 15 letters long. this story about Grace dug some memories.

Great

Tear jerker, LOVED IT!!!! THANK YOU.

What a very touching story worth 10_stars thank you

Wow, not often a story on here makes me cry but this one really got to me. I hope you are still writing, you have such talent. 5*

This story being on this website does it a disservice IMO. This story is beyond good, I'm a grown man sitting here crying over a little girl dying in a story. This story moved me and it's so beautiful and tragic. I was so hoping for the happy ending where Grace got a last second doner and everything worked out for everyone. This was an amazing story that happened to include a sex scene far more than it was an erotic story. Thank you for this wonderful story that deserves so much more than to be on an erotic story website.

As stated by others, great story.

(Grace looked down on her father and Miss Claire and smiled knowing he found love and wouldn't be alone. It was time for her to go.)

This old man still has tears in his eyes. I was thinking that Grace would get a last second donor BUT it would be Peter's && Pauline's baby I am glad it did not end that way. A story book ending would be if they had married and had their own child. Great story!

Brilliant story, and definitely a 5 star story imho, I did find a few odd phrases/word choices though, e.g. “turned on combustion” instead of “started engine”, I don’t know if English is your first language or not, but if it isn’t, you deserve a lot more credit than the current 4.88 for writing at such a high quality in what may be a second language.

Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

Incredible work of art! Yeah, I cried when Grace died. Not going to lie.

That's the mark of an exceptional author. I hope you will write more.

Very difficult read. But very well written. Thak you.

Amazing story!!! Thank you so much!

I'm bawling right now. You have an amazing talent in writing!

my heart broke

My heart broke ╯︿╰

Actually I thought it needed a final page for conclusing. But I'm picky so I won't rate it as it is better than 4 :-)

Put a child with disabilities in a love story, that is as well written as this. gets the tears flowing everytime.5 stars

Your ending sucked.

Why?? Why Grace had to die?

This is beautifully written. My younger son had a heart defect, and one operation fixed the issue. One of the best stories on the site. Certainly one of the best in the romance category.

Oh so bitter sweet, wonderfull story. 5*

Havnt cried like this in a ehile

Awesome, but…….every damn plane will have me tearing up thinking of Grace!

Exceptionally well written, and the heart rang through it all.

Be proud of your story!