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I heard him come in the room. I started to lower my top back down, then thought, "What the fuck?" and pulled it over my head. I pulled my bottoms off as well. I took one last peek at myself in the mirror. I had to agree with my new hubby. I'm pretty fuckin hot. I'm pretty. And I'm fuckin hot.
I walked out of the bathroom and tossed my unused clothing in Brian's face, swatted his sexy ass, and ran to the bed with him trying to slap my naked ass all the way. I stopped short of the bed and turned. He almost ran me over, but he stopped at the perfect moment; in my arms. I threw my arms around him, pulled him close, and kissed him.
"Hiya, sexy," I said as I began removing his PJs. "Somebody's overdressed."
When he was naked, I grabbed his cock and led him the rest of the way to the bed. He was playing with my ass all the way.
I crawled into bed, turned, and snuggled in close to him. He wrapped his big, loving arms around me. He kissed me with more passion than I deserve.
I pulled away from the kiss, looked into his dreamy eyes, kissed him lightly, and said, "Make love to me, my big, sexy, ruggedly handsome husband. Tomorrow, we'll be walking on a secluded beach and fucking in our own private bungalow."
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Thanks for reading. Please rate and comment. I would love to get feedback from those of you rating the story less than a 5. If you can take the time to let me know what I can do to earn a 5-star rating from you, I'd appreciate it.
Chapter 4 is written and waiting to be edited. For those looking for more chapters, I usually wait at least a week (for Literotica to remove the "NEW" tag on the last story) before submitting the next chapter.
I've also completed a new story about twins (brother and sister). It should come out shortly after this one. In that story, the sister is a lesbian with a girlfriend. Or is she Bi? Hmm?
- COMMENTS
ScottishTexan10 months agoI realize this is fiction, but some of it was too far over the top. The parents giving them their blessing was great, but the faux wedding a key to the master bedroom was pushing it outside of the believable factor. I would have preferred a longer engagement myself. But I didn't take away any points from your score. 5/5
dirtyoldbimanalmost 3 years agowell written with a few different twists from other sibling love stories. Just seemed longer reading both their versions which were pretty much the same. If Brian is sterile from some childhood accident wouldn't his Mother know that?
Anonymousover 3 years agoA very interesting and well written story. You are truly a gifted writer with a sharp wit and I assume also a sharp mind. Truly enjoyed your story that was actually a story and not just a never ending series of sex scenes. Really as goes the old adage, once you pick it up it is hard to put down. Please continue to write and add to this story and I do look forward to reading more of your insertions.
Thanks again for your entries.
Southpaw1430over 3 years agoI enjoyed this story, and a very good chapter. Thanks for the story.
PrinceLukeover 4 years agoGot 5 stars from me. Just wondering about thiz secret of Brians now lol. Keep it up the cliffhanger is sweet.
chapelsknightabout 6 years agoSo I started with chapter 3.....first you used A Christmas Story and Princess Bride.....awesomeness.....and the story is pretty awesome too!
Anonymousabout 6 years agoThe story is a superb love story that shows two loving people -- a handsome young man and his beautiful bride -- who just HAPPEN to be brother and sister twins. I couldn't have imagined where you would take the story in Chapter 3, and must say that that was a really pleasurable and wonderful way to handle everyone finding out. I love your story thus far, and love the descriptions you have given them...his sexy hairy chest and abs, his big brother cock, his muscular shoulders, arms, thighs, and her beautiful breasts and pussy.
I agree with the other comment about the coarse language. I vote for a return to the more romantic and tender loving language between them. They are so deeply in love and shouldn't their language reflect that? Sometimes the coarse language makes them sound insulting to each other.
I can't imagine what Brian's big secret is, especially one that would bring him to tears, but I believe you are committed to a happy ending for the story and will endeavor to lead the story in that direction.
If they want children, they can wait to finish college first and then work on building their family. At times, I am crying right along with them. Please keep your beautiful story going! And thanks for writing such a riveting story!
