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Click here"You can stay if you want. It's not like you haven't seen me naked."
"True. I do like seeing you that way, too"
I go to my room to get some clothes. "You packed my clothes and everything, Thank you. You'd think you were trying to rush me off."
"Not at all."
I come back to Daddy's bedroom and dress, "I know, I'd stay if I didn't have school."
Daddy watches me intently as I dress. I'm wearing a skirt and blouse and sandals.
We go downstairs and I eat my lunch, dreading that I have to go.
While I am eating Daddy carries my things to my car. He walks me to the door. Takes my hands and says, "I know you have to go, as do you. Just know that I enjoyed this visit very much."
"Me too, Daddy."
He pulls me close and kisses my lips passionately but gently.
I break the kiss and head to my car. "Call me, Amber."
"I will, every night."
*****
I hope you have enjoyed reading the first chapter, of what I hope is many, as much as I enjoyed writing it.
Let me know what you think.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 4 years agoThis was a great story even with the typo's. It's been about a month now and I was wondering if you're going to wrote any more?
Anonymousover 4 years agoYou should write more. Expand on the sex. Add some foreplay into it.
Purduemyronover 4 years agoI agree with other comments. I loved the story but the typos are distracting. Please proof read or, better yet, have someone else read it
Anonymousover 4 years agoPros... you have a good style and nice flow of thought and imagination so continue writing. Con... just one... please proof-read and/or edit the story before posting for maximum impact
Dunkirkover 4 years agoPlease add to this story. Amber needs to forget the pill and bear her father's child
RodThrustinover 4 years agoBecause of the other comments. The writing and typos are so terrible I wasn't even going to finish. After too many "I am"s instead of "I'm'--like people really talk--and when "daddy" was spelled "daffy," I decided to not bother with the rest. But these other comments gave me the inclination to finish. So I will, But, please, no content can be so good as to make up for the lousy presentation. Get an editor, or step away from the finished product for at least a few days, and then re-read it and hopefully see and correct the errors.
Anonymousover 4 years agoI also enjoyed my Dad . As a young daughter I too tricked dad into making love to me
I was in high school and would come home before Mom and strip off my clothes and
go to Dad. He was my first and my teacher too . Please write more soon .
Anonymousover 4 years agoHi. Just an idea, if you don't have a friendly editor you can run your work by, use one of the many free text to voice websites or free phone apps. Then things like daffy vs. daddy will jump out. I'm dyslexci and I use it all the tiem to check my wokr :--)
