An Aperture Apart

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Slowly Paul lifted her, his fingers digging into her flesh. The sudden contrast between being full and empty made her moan. He poised her right at the tip, letting it slip out entirely and rub against her clit.

"Where did— you learn to fuck like this?" Aiko breathed, the syllables barely slipping between her teeth. Her hands held onto the slick skin of his forearms.

"A lot of reading." Paul positioned her over him and before she could process what that meant, slammed into her again with as much fury as the first thrust, hitting the same deep barrier with full force.

"Oh god— Paul—" she wailed. Aiko feared that he'd damage her, but was more afraid that he'd stop. "Paul—"

"It's okay," he assured in a hushed voice, "it's okay." He lifted her and pounded into her again, this time more swiftly and with less ferocity. Gradually they fell into a fast, frantic rhythm.

"Remember to look at me," he said again when her eyes absently shut from the onslaught. Aiko opened them with great effort, panting uncontrollably as her breasts bounced and quivered from his relentless thrusting. The room was charged with their grunts and the wet sounds of their fucking.

Paul's face tensed from the building pressure. She watched him swallow dryly, the tips of his teeth meeting behind his parched lips.

"Paul—" she gasped. "I'm gonna— come if we keep—"

"Me too."

Just as she felt her stomach tighten he quickly sat up, pushing her onto her back. He continued slamming into her, each thrust now beating against the belly side of her passage. Aiko threw her head back in an unbearable rapture—she was so close.

Paul buried a hand her hair, bringing her head back to face him. His other hand found her breast through the fabric of her shirt and fit his palm to its shape. He had a tenderly swollen nipple pinched between the knuckles of his middle and ring fingers.

"Look at me when you come, Aiko," he whispered, his own orgasm drawing near.

Each of his thrusts slammed into her like a fifteen thousand ton freight train. Her body convulsed forcefully, her fingers finding and digging into the taut skin of his stomach. She felt on the verge of a black, thunderous death as she came. Paul swiftly leaned down just in time to smother her scream with his mouth. Her pupils dilated silently into black, bottomless discs as she stared into his eyes.

Her muscles clenched down around him with unforgiving force, driving him past that blinding point of no return. His entire body tensed and froze as he was caught halfway in her. Hot cum surged out of him in shuddering spasms and into her spent body.

*

In the early hours of the morning, Paul woke quietly.

A tired Aiko lay close behind him, breathing shallow, even breaths. He didn't move. He cracked open bleary eyes to see her upturned camera on the floor, soaked in whiskey. An empty juice glass lay on its side several inches away.

In his half-asleep mind he saw the camera's contents readily dissolving, the roll of film inside its body a gnarled tape of stunning, invisible colors.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
An unexpected gem

Well done, intense and lethargic.

SilverMuseSilverMuseabout 8 years ago

Gorgeously written, evocative, and real. Thank you.

WarfolomeiWarfolomeiover 10 years ago
Interesting.

While not overly informative, it does present an interesting scenario. Shame it's so short.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
brilliant!

long awaited and simply a pleasure to read

Auden JamesAuden Jamesover 13 years ago
Another piece of brilliance by Literotica’s currently best writer!

I just wanted to make some minor changes to my profile when I realized that something had already been altered without me doing anything: next to the nick of one of my favorite authors there was indicated a new story: ohmanon, 2 stories. Then and there I knew that meant a major change – not just to my trivial member page but to Literotica as a whole, for the writer who’d already outdone nearly every other piece of fiction on this site with “Man-Shaped Mirror” indeed had published another story.

It was time to read. And what an exquisite read it was! I read slowly, relishing every single word, trying to make the experience to last as long as possible. But eventually the story overcame me. It just sucked me in and didn’t release me before the last line, only to leave me stunned and speechless, fantasizing that the story continued on and on and so forth.

I’m in awe, again. I’m in awe of ohmanon’s new story. It’s terrific. Once again.

You see, the story is such great erotica I couldn’t care less that it does not outrank ohmanon’s debut but instead excels on its own right as a masterful depiction of human eroticism on e v e r y level.

The language is superb, beautiful complexity that reads so incredibly elegantly with the greatest of ease that one is left wondering why (almost) no one else on here has her/his way with language like ohmanon does. After reading it you cannot imagine any other way of wording. You’re simply hopped up – not on drugs, but on words.

Words that paint at once a poignant and utterly authentic atmosphere. You absorb the world that ohmanon spreads out. You empathize with the character’s within, their lives and thoughts. You adhere to what’s happening to them, to the actions they take. And from the very first paragraph there’s the underlying, yet subtle erotic excitement, radiating its alluring tension that makes you anticipate what’ll happen next. And when finally things really heat up it just strikes you with such power that you have no other choice but to succumb.

Did I already say that this story is AMAZING? Well, you ought to know by now.

Read it. Simply read it. It’s a must read for anyone who‘s endowed with a sense of genuine erotica.

Regards and best wishes

–AJ

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 14 years ago
Absolutely stunning

This is one of the most powerful stories I have ever read. Spare, gripping, understated, lives and passion unfolding. Perfect. Deserves to be read and celebrated. Added to my favourites, and I don't do that often.

Still gasping at the power of your writing. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wow.

Amazing writing...

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