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"I know right!" Lyla laughed as she pressed her soft lips against Mike's and they resumed lovingly kissing.
Seamlessly, the siblings began rocking gently together, Lyla grinding her round booty back against his groin, Mike grinding into her epic bubble-butt and starting to slowly move his massively thick schlong inside her tight asshole with shallow, seed-lubed in and out motions. Spooned snugly, caught in a shared haze of forbidden pleasure, brother and sister traded languid kisses as they moaned and panted into each other's mouth, getting into the rhythm of another intimate, lazy sodomy. As her receptive anal walls lit up with sizzles of perfect physical bliss, Lyla whimpered softly as she spoke right into Mike's smooching lips.
"Oooh Mikey, this is awesome! Oohhh yeeess... I'm so glad we're doing it, really. Uuuhh yes, you're so deep in my ass, I love it! Your big cock and my big butt are so perfect for each other, it's like we're meant to be together like this uuhh god..." Lyla mumbled ecstatically, already feeling the first roars of what she knew would be another rolling orgasmic storm starting to wash over her body, radiating outward from her dick-stuff, sperm-flooded rectum. "Ohhh fuck, I can't believe how good you feel in my ass, Mikey... But I still want to feel you cumming in my pussy too, sometime," she giggled between her ever more labored gasps, her juicy slit drooling profusely as a new anal climax drew closer. "Uunghh, next time maybe... But I want you in my ass for now ooowhhh... Only in my ass... Deep in my uuhh aaaass!"
Thrilled by those words and by what they implied, Mike exhaled with anticipation, feeling his boner throb with joy as he picked up his ass-stretching tempo, egged on by the tell-tale ripples of pleasure coursing through his sister's creamy, dick-milking anal passage. "Next time..." he murmured as his heartbeat quickened, spurred on by the potent mix of savage arousal and true affection that Lyla inspired in him. "That sounds good, I can't wait!"
"Ooohh yeah, it sounds sooo good, I can't wait too... Uunghh fuck yeahh," Lyla mewled, her mouth shaped into a perfect O, her bespectacled eyes fluttering closed and her asshole squeezing Mike's butt-stuffing pole in a smooth yet powerful tugging grip as he once again pushed her over the edge and into a glowing wave of pleasure with delicious, shocking ease by filling her needy anus with his huge brotherly cock. "Oowh fuck, it's s-s-so good, Mikey... Uuuhh so fucking good! Ooohhh yeeeess... Yeeeaahh!"
Smiling and moaning as Lyla's orgasming rectum massaged his fat schlong within its tight slippery warmth, Mike spooned his sister closer and picked up his ass-cramming pace, making her writhe and gasp in his loving embrace. Their mouths fused together within moments, their kisses matching the passion of their sodomy as their shared anal ecstasy enveloped them both, joining them in pleasure and obliterating everything else.
It was still early, and it was already a night to remember.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous5 months agoGreat story, and that chapter was wonderful.
But unfortunately, in real life, monster cooks and happy, COMFORTABLE, FULFILLING, anal experiences do NOT go together…
Anonymous6 months agoI agree with the verbal vomit comment. This is a hot series, but there are too many redundant words that slow down the pace and make it hard to read. So many of those hyphenated verb words. Ass-cramming, for example. This story is full of those type of words, and it makes the prose suffer.
Too many "horsedick" and "monstercock" mentions. The many different synonyms for cock in this story get tiring. Not too mention they're odd. Horsedick and monstercock should never be in an erotic story. They're strange words. And Lyla verbally saying monstercock sounded too unrealistic.
"Girlcum." Another unnecessary word.
Too many unnecessary adjectives and adverbs. Too many "his sister" mentions. When I'm constantly being reminded that she's his sister, it lessens the impact of the fact that he's banging his sister. Like, we get it. She's his sister. We know. The same goes for the mom's POV and her constant "her son" or "her boy". The "her boy" mentions especially took me out of the story. It was an unnecessary epithet that was used way too much. And for this chapter, the repetitive mentions of "bubble-butt" annoyed me as well. We get it. She has a bubble-butt. But I will say this isn't that bad, considering it's a reminder to the reader that she has one. Yet it's somewhat overused.
Again, it's a hot story. But the clutter of words makes it a hard read. Including a mess of adjectives, unnecessary epithets, adverbs, and repetitive words don't make the prose better. It makes it worse.
One example of a Literotica story that isn't annoyingly wordy is Dick Spanker's "Mother's Helping Hand" series. It's always refreshing to go to that series after I spend time looking at too-wordy stories on here. The writing in that story flows much better.
Using the "Find in page" option helps me catch redundant words in stories. FIP can count how many times a certain word is used on a webpage. It's a helpful tool as a writer and a reader. For example, I used it to find out that one popular author on here always had "enflamed knob" or "enormous knob" constantly used in one of his stories, and maybe more of them. And a few other certain adjectives before other mentions of "knob". It was frustrating. It's not a sin to NOT have an adjective before a noun.
Regardless, I don't want to trash talk this series. I'm simply explaining how a good story can be ruined by excessive words. Reading shouldn't feel like a chore. But stories like this one feel like chores because of the redundant words infesting them.
I praise those Literotica series that don't have a mess of words that hurt the flow of the stories. Mother's Helping Hand is one of those stories. Sadly, this one is not.
But yeah, the sex scenes in this series is too wordy. That's the main issue I have with it. It would've been so much better if the unnecessary words didn't clutter it.
Anonymousabout 1 year agoall harem stories get repetitive and boring. It ends up just being one cut/paste sex scene after another, with names changed. Especially when it's 90% poop chute idiocy.
Anonymousover 2 years agoToo much verbal vomit. Your over description or worded writing makes reading your story a chore. The sex scenes are so over described they become tiresome instead of arousing. I switched to reading only 1 or 2 sentences per paragraph and couldn't finish the entire story. Sometimes less is more. Learn to write!
