All Comments on 'Anne's Ambition Ch. 02'

Pretty much the way it goes most cheaters never get caught,fact I know because I have cheated with married women over thirty married women,did I feel bad not in the least I was married at the time,why would I in today's society cheating seems of no concern everybody does,did I feel bad for the husband's hell no

What a cunt!!!!

Very Very Poor

Well written but you write about a despicable character. An absolutely horrible narcissistic bitch who only thinks of her needs and nobody else.

The husband and kids deserve a better person than her in their lives. She is disgusting.

FECKLESS SHIT

Far too wordy. Action good but not exciting due to all the explanation. Author should show rather than explain. Also, why do we never meet the husband? Is this to show that he is meaningless to the protagonist?

First of all I enjoyed this story, you spelled out what not to expect at the start, so moralising or moaning about no comebacks is pretty crass. Of course Anne is a calculating cheating bitch, totally self entered and in the end uncaring about those who should matter, she's a nasty cheating slut who

rationalises that she somehow deservess it.

For all that you gave us fair warning, and the eroticism and journey Anne takes was nothing but fascinating to read and extremely erotic too.

This story badly needs an editor. Too many wasted scenes, too many repetitive points, and too many instances where the reader saw something but the writer felt the need to tell us about it. This should've been about half as long and twice as intense. 3 stars.

No fu*king plot. Just scenes strung together. Author needs to learn the elements of an actual story. Nothing but a diary of a narcissist, and not a very interesting or compelling one, at that.

In your tags and pre-story screed, please include the words, "There's no actual story here, despite this being posted on a 'story' site. Instead, I've presented you a series of jerk-off vignettes written with a common female character."

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Wasted your talent and my time. "Move along, nothing to see here, folks!"

KNOCK THE PIG'S TEETH OUT

Well this story is fictional and is supposed to anger the guys that are true to their wives. Actually this happens a lot in the business world. Men cheat and women cheat all the time. Its wrong but its life.

What a truly repulsive individual being portrayed here. Just a terrible and awful human being.

Wow. Apparently Anne is a heroine.

I had hoped this tale would go somewhere, but it had no trajectory or conflict. Anne’s decision to become a slut was just a decision, she had no qualms about it, once she realized she was horny for extra-marital sex. I hoped the vignettes that were written to present her sexual box of chocolates were more than just grist for the readers’ masturbatory thrills, and would instead lead to some sort of epiphany, other than her conclusion, “more of the same, please, with a dash of humiliation for my cuckolded husband as I kiss him, and thanks.” It was a bit of a letdown, as the writing was otherwise good.

Best stop writing. It’s so bad that it hurts…

you should right a part 3 and finish the story the husband not having a clue is unreal you don't have him in the story at all or the children very shallow story 2 stars

Weak as water... drawn out to a nonsensical let down!... your not English are you?