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'Babe, I already am home.'
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stevieraygovanover 14 years agoAuthorCan't disagree with a word of it, including the fact that yes, trolls can and do anger me. Sure, I also pity them, as you say, yet I can't help but be angered over the inequity. They can trash something, and because they do so anonymously, they risk nothing. There is no accountability for such cowards. They don't write stories themselves, they don't put themselves out there, and they're free to wallow.<p>
Btw, how did you ever come to find this story, this late in the game? Thank you for reading it, and for leaving a real comment.
studebakerhawkover 14 years agoThe question is: What is the definition of "art?" and it applies to all forms of artistic expression, not just writing. Does 'art' occur when an individual creates something (like writing a story) or when somebody else experiences that creation (reading the story)? As the writer/artist you can only control the story you produce. If you open yourself up to public scrutiny, then you're going to have to accept that your product WILL BE perceived in ways that you never intended and in ways that are actually the opposite of what you wrote. All these perceptions will be filtered through whatever personal agendas may be operating. Since you have little or no control over how your product is received, my personal belief is that you should write the stories that give YOU the most satisfaction and not worry so much about how others react to it. Look for the honest critiques and ignore the flamers. It is unfortunate that so many of us are so eager to assail stories, available to us at no cost, offered up for our enjoyment. Perhaps it might help to consider the situation of those who trash your stories without reading them. How sad is it that they feel the need to resort to these behaviors to find purpose and fulfillment in their lives? Though they may have earned your anger, they deserve your pity because they have revealed how small they really are. I enjoyed your story, thank you for sharing it.
"Damn the torpedoes! Full steam ahead." - US Adm. David Farragut.
Anonymousover 14 years agoHon, you know why you write, and who you're actually writing for. Please, continue. This was hilarious, and those who can't see how ridiculous all the scenarios in the story are, well they over-populate the world anyway. Honestly, Pollyanna herself had a running commentary on the silliness of it all. Keep your sense of humor in place.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoThis is a detailed, imaginative, skilled piece of erotic text, but its also hilarious.
I love it well done.
