Aprons For Gayle Ch. 09

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"You're welcome, toes. As well as punishment, I'm a big believer in positive reinforcement. Now, finish your dinner before I have to force feed you."

Twenty minutes later, Hamish removed the chastity belt in the laundry area, placed it on the dryer and told her to clean the kitchen. He then excused himself with no explanation of what he was doing, not that she was in the position to ask. When she was done, he told her to go upstairs, remove the butt plug and return wearing nothing but the slippers.

Coming down the stairs, she saw him sitting on the bottom step tossing a tennis ball across the hall for Bessie, who eagerly returned it, her tail wagging vigorously. When he heard the wooden step creaking, he turned and smiled. Standing, he put out his hand, which she took; she needed help with the last few steps, her legs were shaking that badly.

"Are you ready?" he asked.

Shaking her head, she replied, "Yes Sir."

He chuckled as he led her down the short hallway towards the door to the dungeon. She was so focused on that evil door that her arm suddenly jerked, hard. Turning around, she asked, "What are you doing? I thought we were—"

"No, Ms. Boyce," he grinned as he opened his library door. "The dungeon is for when you REALLY fuck up."

"Oh, shit!" she groaned then chuckled ... until she walked into the room.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
MORE NOW

Pleeeease

Addicted2WritingAddicted2Writingover 10 years agoAuthor
Chapter 10 is pending!

It was submitted on Tuesday. It should be posted the next few days, hopefully!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Thanks :)

I am really enjoying this story a great deal! Thanks and please keep up the great work! :)

Addicted2WritingAddicted2Writingover 10 years agoAuthor
Ummm, I lied

1st: Chapter 10 won't be up 'til probably mid-week. I've had some personal issues that made my brain forget H & G for a bit. I'm so sorry for the wait!

2nd: There is no sex. 10 went longer than expected, so chapter 11 will be the 'fun one.'

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Waiting for Chapter 10

Well I've been loving this story and the developing relationship between Hamish & Gayle. Yeh Hamish is a bit of a prick but he seems to be learning from Gayle as much as she is learning from him about the BDSM life. I look forward to chapter 10 (mind you I keep checking everyday for the update) but understand writing a new chapter every week can be very challenging. Hope it's up soon (pun intended).

Addicted2WritingAddicted2Writingover 10 years agoAuthor
Chapter Ten...

... will be late, folks! Sorry about that, but I've had trouble getting myself going again. And it's sex, so that slows me down, too.

MJ: NO smart comment, dear, PLEASE! hehe

jennyb2492jennyb2492over 10 years ago

Well, put me down as one of the other two fans. I've just been too busy working to read and comment. But, damn, girl! Bring on the punishment already! I'm feeling like her, with stomach all a-quiver! 😞😁😞😁

Addicted2WritingAddicted2Writingover 10 years agoAuthor
@ Anon...'I think...'

Thank you for your valid thoughts.

I get your points, but as I've said before (as well as Scooter) we are building this up slowly. It hasn't even been a week yet and it's a six-month assignment.

There are LOTS of changes to come, for both Hamish and Gayle.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I think

this series is making me stupid. I was totally into it, and then, I realized if you take away the castle and his hotness you really just have an abuser. Change the setting to a caravan park and you'll see what I mean. Just 'cuz he's rich and has a castle doesn't change that. I don't mean to flame, really, I don't. (and I don't rate stories down because I disagree with their philosophy - I just don't rate them)

So far the trajectory of their story follows a classic abusive relationship completely. She's vulnerable, isolated and completely dependent upon him for everything. He's doing everything he can to keep her that way. He uses fear and uncertainty to keep her emotionally on edge. (I see that you seem to be trying to soften him based on reader reaction, but that's not really working for me). He blames her for not getting his "sense of humor." He controls every decision and action she makes. She is permitted no independence, either of thought or deed.

This is a sad, sad story in the real world. A woman, vulnerable, becomes dependent on a man who uses that dependency to control her. When she wants something other that what he wants, she's punished. His mistakes are brushed away. Hers require beatings so she'll "learn." Dressing it up as erotica fantasy doesn't change the core truth of this type of relationship.

Addicted2WritingAddicted2Writingover 10 years agoAuthor
To Anon re: sub male....

Oh, I could write a true story about a submissive male (real life), but I have to finish my two fics first. So be on the lookout, OK?

Thanks for your comment.

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