As I Want You to Be

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"Can I try licking your pussy next, please?"

Mia turned left to take her stray home and feed her.

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claire_westclaire_west5 months ago

Simply excellent. Love the mix of experience and naivety. I wish I had Mia’s sang froid! 5 stars all the way.

Nicole2023Nicole2023over 1 year ago

Love the baby dyke

UncertainTUncertainTalmost 2 years ago

Agree with Okami, so cute.

okami1061okami1061almost 2 years ago

OK. Cutest 5 I've given.

IntoblackIntoblackalmost 3 years ago

Loved it! Great description of real lesbian sex. I get the feeling you have some real-life experience in that area. Keep up the writing!

WAT456WAT456about 4 years ago
Lovin' It!

Wow, you write shorts amazingly! I'm gonna read one of your longer ones, trusting that my heart can take the pounding! Wonderful!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Amazing Story

Amazing Ending

TSreaderTSreaderabout 5 years ago
A wonderful first chapter

Wonderfully done! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nice start

Quite enjoyable. Glad I started at the beginning. Ready to read next part.

RenataAsheRenataAsheover 6 years ago

Lovely little story you have here and very arousing thank you! Continuing on the hotness.

qarlcueqarlcueover 9 years ago
Dripping with lust, warmth, detail

breathless and believable. I loved reading this. Thanks

elusiouselusiousalmost 10 years ago

Awesome writing- good flow, realistic, characters thoughts/actions are totally believable. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter now and checking out your other stories. :)

YoYoBeeYoYoBeealmost 10 years ago
Aww ^_^

This is so cute.

Sexy_LisaSexy_Lisaalmost 10 years ago
Awesome, totally awesome

You've done it again. There has got to be more... Please...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
LesbianChickLit. __ Woo wee girl, that is HOT!!!!

Good Start! A real good start!! Please don't stop here!!!

Thank You..

Gay Paige.

ToadattoadhallToadattoadhallover 10 years ago
A Great Story

I really enjoyed this story as it is, but it is great that you have decided to add to it. I can't wait!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
PLEASE

HURRY!!!!!

LesbianChickLitLesbianChickLitover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

...everyone. I like LJ too and intend to add two sequels to this at some undefined point in the future, interspersed with other series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very good

Very good, and very well-written (alike to every story you produce).

You have a fantastic ability for character-development, and I couldn't agree more with what Doc said; the development and progress is so real and natural that it leaps off the screen.

Some sort of follow-up to this story, or these characters would be great (LJ was fucking HOT), and very much appreciated!

Great work! :)

AurimazAurimazover 10 years ago

As a short story, it's very good written. Go on :)

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