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"I told you," Ashley grinned up at me, "He's a keeper."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoThe amount of sex is perfect. I love this story. I'm really looking forward to seeing what's going on with the wife.
Don't worry about what these other people are saying. It's awesome. Keep up the good work!
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI'm starting to lose interest due to lack of updates. You spewed out update after update in rapid succession last time and then shifted tempo to typical Literotica pace. I get it, writing takes a while. I'm for sure not a 'creator' so my criticism isn't truly fair - apologies to you.
End the story or speed up the updates, my good friend.
rightbankalmost 10 years agosome have said, and you responded, that there is too much sex. I think what people are saying is that it all seems to be pretty much the same. the only differences are the clothing and the verbage.
The GPS. if it is a tracker, he would know where the tracker started and where it ended up on each trip. where did the trip begin when she went to the no-tell-hotel and where did she go after?
and why is there almost no mention of the spa weekend this time? if she really is doing something it is now. and possibly with her sister. just sayin.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoenjoying the series so far and trying to guess how it will end. Keep writing!
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoToo much sex? There's too much sex?!?!? What do you expect? It's erotic fiction. Geeze, some of you commenters are ridiculous.
Outstanding. I've been checking daily for ch 11 and was very pleased with this latest segment of the story. Keep it up.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoGenerally speaking I like this story even if there is way too much sex and not enough story line development. However, after reading eleven chapters I am beginning to wonder when and how this story is ever going end. I think the author has reached the point that over another chapter or two this story needs to reach its conclusion.
George in Omaha
tlk2mealmost 10 years agoLoving this series, reminds a bit of the The Reawakening of Dr. Clark series-which i hope one day gets continued-keep up the good work, just hope it doesn't take so long for the next chapter
