All Comments on 'Auction Affair'

The switching first-person perspective is tough to read. Also she could have easily gotten tested for X.

I liked it.

Simon_M

Terrible switches of POV made this very messy. Please get an editor.

An average story. Could have been better, if the boyfriend had felt some retribution. And wifey had filed a police report, about being drugged. 3 stars.

An okay read, could have been good, maybe even great, but the shifting POV just didn't work. Would probably have worked better as a multiple chapter story, each chapter telling the whole story from one POV. As it stands, story has potential but the execution leaves a lot to be desired.

Atrocious editing. PoV changing by random, sometimes in the same sentence.

Alas, none of the characters are likeable and the storyline is lacking, so some rewriting while cleaning it up would be a good idea.

absolute trash

OK, still...there should have been some retribution on Vernon. They should have gone then and got a blood test to show the drug. They should have gone to the police, or whatever, and fucked up Vernon's life. If they did all those things, RAAC would have been better.

Nice story, could have been shorter, it was pretty obvious where it was headed.

I thought it was a well written sweet story. Makes me miss the 45 years I had with my “Carla.” She’s been gone 8 years. Stories like this bring back the way we loved each other. I always say about some of the critics here,”if you want Tolstoy read ‘War and Peace.’

A great story of love and forgiveness, truly a romance about true love!

Very enjoyable read. Thank you.

I just read some poor anonymous fellow write that this story is crap, parents should mind their own busines, Cable is a queer cuckold and his wife is a whore. He couldn't be more wrong. She screwed but willinly payed the price and was drugged by a total asshole. The hateful critic has a miserable life, that much is obvious.

Hard to believe that a blowjob in public at an intersection is just a lapse in judgement. I don't know if that is forgivable. Vernon had to be dealt with also. He should have had her call Vernon, set up a meeting, taze his ass, cut off his dick and leave it in his mouth.

"She should have known better. How stupid could she be?" Sir, this is the Loving Wives section. You know very well there is no limit to their stupidity, nor their naivety, when it comes to assholes coming onto them. Just be thankful she wasn't actually cheating on you in the traditional sense and that all he got from his drugging efforts was a blowjob. Now move along please.

I would have liked to see Vern getting some retribution handed to him for being a drugging scumbag.

Not bad for a RAAC. Vernon should have had his ass beaten up....but it's your story. 4 stars.

To the anon who said the author is a raging queer... you need therapy. Lots and lots of therapy.

WIMPY

4 stars for a well written tale. Didn’t really care for the MC as he seems like a great big wimp. Ah well… your story… you tell it. DMW aka Sumnut96

Alls well that ends well. 5*

Good story, such as it is, but the almost frenzied changes of Perspektive/POV made for an exhausting read.

Get help, Fast!

Thanks for a delightfully charming love story, well-written and an excellent read!! Good job!!!!