All Comments on 'Best Present Ever: Bitch Sister'

I would love to read the rest of the stories in this order:

Best Present Ever: Mom

Best Present Ever: MILF Neighbor

Best Present Ever: Sister's Friends

This story was amazing. i cant wait to read the other 3 so you should write them all

what a great story, can you do all 3 :)

Absolutely lovely move from forcing innocent little shy brother to do her bidding into having him take control. The brazen scene with the family watching movies made me stop touching so I could hold off from finishing too early ;) And honestly, I'd love to see more of Della myself ;)

Two below me, domination without a great deal of humiliation. Fucking ace

I hope do them all, let your Muse determine the order.

I like how you tantalize me. You get me wet right away and then build and stop, build and stop with straight forward and smooth to the point writing.

You'd be surprised how little I say that. Domination with very little humiliation, simply obedience. She brought him into her world, then he took it. Nice. One critique, you take a picture for posterity, not prosperity. On this case the pictures probably brought both, but I'm sure you ment the former. The sex scenes were some of the best I've read so definatly keep writing!

fuck yes do all three make a massive chapter this got me so worked up love it was never really into the hole domination but fuck it ill try it with the misses SO GOOD MAN remember ALL THREE !!

i would love to read all three parts

Well done! I read the story about the college sister (both parts) and loved how you actually have interesting plots in your ridiculously sexy stories. This was even better though, I loved the reverse in fortune and how the weak borther became the dominant one.

There is a lot of info you could write about on all three ideas. Please continue to write about what you started.

that was hot - you are a new fav - and a 5 too.

Love the shift in power!

This definitely should be developed into to a series. You have a delightfully kinky naughty mind. I enjoy ALL your stories, but this is especially delightful

Take them one at a time -quality rather than quantity. Oh, Sandra might be there for some or all of either Mrs R or Beth. Save the group scene for late in the series. Let us get to know a bit about each of the women and a bit more about Matthew along the way. He and Beth might have something in common and be more than just another fuck, or even Della.

Why not try several more women

Would love to read about MILF you and MOM...wink

let read the neighbor story

As always, well written and ful of detail. I particularly enjoyed the pieces on the stockings, but also the imagery I conjured up when you wrote of the MILFs in bikinis. I look forward to parts 2 and beyond

Absolutely fucking sucking wonderful, I am a cunt struck muff diving sex maniac, the more I get the more I want. I just love to get totally drunk on cunt juice, then fuck the girls into next week, also to keep sucking and fucking till we pass out, then to start over. my girl friend and her girl friends will meet up and re-enact this story and enjoy insane levels of sexual pleasure. More and more please and soon, one of the best ever

What can I add? Everyone else has said all I can think of.

Hi,

Part 2 is finally out and called Cheerleader Orgy and takes place a couple days later with 2 of his sister's friends...and his sister of course!!!

http://www.literotica.com/s/best-present-ever-cheerleader-orgy

Doesn't matter , just fuck all of them :)

Sandra is the sister we all dreamed of "having." great touch to add Beth, the subs and the next door neighbor. great imagination! keep them cumming. can't wait to read what's next.

would love to read in this order : sister's friends, MILF neighbor, and then mom

Great story. I would say sister's friends, then MILF, then mom.

I liked this story, enough to make my first ever comment(and an account to do so), and my opinion on which to do next is the MILF, then Sister's Friend...

Would Mom be another Incest/Taboo Story? (Idk)

Or the story of Ms. Raske seducing thier Mother? (Last, as a side story)

Sisters freind then milf then mother please.

I think Sister's Friends should be next followed by MILF Neighbor then Mom

i want to read sisters friends

Milf neighbor!

Sister's friend would be mine, but looking forward to them all!

Yup! Right after I put mine in, I read yours and then retreated w/ my tail between my wet legs, to lick my imagination into shape.

Congratulations! Your story has been chosen by the men and women who make up the ASSOCIATION of INDEPENDENT READERS as a winner in their 2011 Winter Holiday Contest. An honor that simply reflects and tries to repay you for your great story.

Thanks for taking the time and effort to entertain us. The readers of this site are lucky to have you among us.

Jacqui O, President of the A.I.R.

Thanks for all the votes and suggestions..part 2...Best Present Ever: Foursome with sister will be out early in 2012!!!

Thanks for all your support!!!

Sister's friend would be my choice.

+1 for Bests Present Ever: Sister's Friends

Another excellent story. Keep them cumming ;)

Friends next then the milf then use the milf to get to mum.

I would like to see the friends, then the MILF, and have his Mom catch him with the MILF and his sister. To where she thinks she wants her some of that.

friends, then the nieghbor, then the mother would probably be the best

awesome hot sexy story. you should do all three additional stories i know i will take great delight in reading them! i would start with beth, then the neighbor then the mom.

make it beth then milf and mom togather

Great story and I believe the follow up with Beth would be awesome. 5 outa 5.

If you make it so that Mrs. Raske is the next one, then Mathew can use Mrs. Raske to help seduce the mom. So make it a 4 part series starting with this one, then Mrs. Raske, then the sister's friends, then the mom. The mom coupd be the climax...or you can go further and do the dad too. The friends can help with the dad while Mrs. Raske helps with the mom...or they can all help eachother after you get the dad to get the mom, or get the mom first then use her to get the dad. It would be best if the last one would be the mom, with dad helping them all. You could make it so that they are always trying to get the mom after getting Mrs. Raske but hqve problems getting the mom still, then get the sisters friends who can help out some but have problems, so they seduce dad and then they get her after haveing to overcome smaller difficulties. Knd of like a boss in a video game that you have to kill. Then hwve a few twists in the story so that you can keep readers even more interested, like mom and dad are brother and sister and then youd have a sequel goin to tell the parents story. If you do the dad, have one of the friends suggest it instead of Mrs. Raske or mathew or Sarah. So im thinking it should be Mrs. Raske, then sisters friends, then dad w/ sis friend giving idea, then mom....then maybe a sequel if you want.

A.J.

Ps...dad story start out as getting mom, but fail, then friend thinks of dad and says it would probably help the caause, then go after dad and come back to mom in next one.have challenges become smaller and smaller in each story then big one at end that they overcome in nxt one, or something like that. Will prob keep readers more interested. Hope advice is helpful...migut see comments if mine placed in sporadic places on site. Not saying this is what you should do, just trying to help writers by giving advice and being helpful. But this is what i would do...if i could write that is. Srry for any spelling or grammer errors, not using computer right now, so its hard to correct things. Perfect example...the word "tjings"...damnit!!!!... that took me 15 trys to do it right...then i screwed it up again with the quotation marked one.

Please let us read them all three!!

Mom for sure

Defiantly make all 3 continuations! :) Very, Very, Very good story!!

MILF neighbor next, please.

all 3 of them

Sister's Friend

Definitely do sister's friend.

id like to read all 3

I would love to read sisters friend next

Does your slut sister smoke? I bet she smokes Virginia Slims 120s with long French tipped slut nails. Keep up the details about her and others in sheer shiny nylons! Loved your story and hope for WAY more!

sister's friend would be the next......

I'm votin for sisters friend since she already had a taste of him and would be an easier transition from this one. But i'd leave a lead to the milf at the end like you did here, then again if you continue, for the mom.

And i will say this is by far one o the best i've read. Please please write again and continue this to a series!!

I vote MILF neighbor

Sister's friend

I have read all of your stories and I think that you have the start of a great series here, no mater which edition that you do next.

Hello J,

Just call me the baby carrot lover! I finally signed up on Literotica!

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Sister's Friends, please.

It is hard not to masturbate during this story. It was so good I had to after I voted. One of the best I have read in a while.

And please for next one: Bets Present Ever: Sister's Friends

Fantastic so far...do neighbor, both seduce Mom, then on to Beth and Della

This story has some great potential to continue. Get the neighbor next, then have her help get his mom. Then he can have the three have a slave orgy with sis's other slaves.

Constructed

Well written, edited, and contrusted. I gave you a 5*. Good luck with the contest.

A great story and nicely written and edited. I would like to read about him fucking his mom and then his mom and sister at the same time.

Thanks for the great story.

would really like to know more firstly about the friends,then the Milf neighbour & lastly mom.But also developing the master sister slut line too.

Fantastic story, I would love to read more.

I would like to see friends next, I have always been a big fan of the mfffff slumber party type stories.

...but minor errors such as "prosperity" for posterity and "lied there" were a bit of an annoyance. There was very little character development other than a vague sense of intellect for the main character, but no application of it. Also, by your name, you love silk stockings and they are reflected in your characters, but dont write it off as being "unable to explain". It's a fetish for you, so describe what is so erotic about it, the passion will show through in the writing.

Those points would be fine, but coupled with the wooden dialogue, this story will stay at "very good stroke story" but if you were to expand it into series, a little more character development would be great, especially for a master/slave dynamic, as the emotional connection is essential.

Also, as a holiday entry, it was a weak connection, it only felt that it just happened to be Christmas, but I liked the holiday traditions being taken advantage of to further the sexual agenda.

Overall, you still got high marks, but I feel you can do better. Looking forward to future efforts.

Friends, MILF,Mom....

Like your story and loved the Dominant Brother Sister theme. Keep that going with deeper submission on sister and her friends part. Get Mom to become his fuck toy as well. Train Dad to be the Dominate one as well taking all of the sluts.

Love to see where you go with this one.

All your stories are really enjoyable, this promises to be a really great series. I vote for the MILF neighbor next but think the friends would probably be the next logical choice. I can see lots of hot action in this series a great follow up series would be what happens when Matthew goes back to college can see a lot fun with college girls and professors. Keep writing

I would like many continuations to this.

MILF neighbour, then Sisters friends, and finally Mom. In that order please.

ES

It was so hot!!!!

Hey there

loved the story. The order I believe should be friends, MILF, friend's - well Beth's mother then upclose and personal with his own mother

Loved it..made me so wet..love to here about the MILF neighbor

i would like you to contiue the story all three would be the best way to go . the story got me hard

I liked your story, and if you choose I like the direction the story could go. First one of his sister's friends, the 'Brit' and then the MILF next door, and then finally his own mother? Your certainly are creative. Maybe the MILF and MOM could come together and visit him and his friends in Grad School.

...crotchless pantyhose not stockings and garter or thigh highs,,,

IF you are a TRUE pantyhose lover then that is what they ALL are to be wearing...

And the others have it right...the proper progression is friend, neighbor, mother...CAN'T WAIT!

Hell yeah ! That was awesome. You should definitely continue this story . As to which

you should do first .... Well cant decide , they all sound so deliciously exiting . But if it goes with Sister's Friends hope you include the lab partner! XD

Mom last. That goes without saying (that would be the icing on the cake before he returns to Harvard). The other two ... cannot decide which order. OK, Sister's Friends (both) first in readiness for MILF neighbour.

Great start to a story. Thanks.

i would like to say that i WANT MORE.

Milf Neighbour has to be the next story, But the other two are just as important to keep the whole thing going.

brilliantly written.

best friend,then neighbour,combine them,,,,,,,mother last,cherry on the cake so to speak! add a sprinkling of some more bondage,a bit of cp and more of the lingerie and it will appeal even more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well done!

great story, keep'em cumming

Good story but it had nothing to do with Christmas... Because of that it gets a 1

1. Sisters Friends

2.Neighbor

3.Mom

but this guy doesn't even resemble a virgin. Virgins don't torment the object of their desire. Virgins cum almost instantly. Propensity is the word your looking for, not prosperity. Finally, you can't spread a girls legs and the pull her shorts down.

While I realize this stuff is fiction and rarely makes perfect sense, your story is just too far fetched.

he put his bitchass sister in her place (on her back, naturally), and proved he's no wuss, and no future cuck

bet the cum-guzzlers hate being shown up by a real Alpha

wonder how this character would do in a "loving wives" segment?

Friends, neighbor, mum for sure!

1st - Friends

2nd - Neighbour

3rd - Mum

Get to it :)

The next chapter should be with the mother after she has been seduced by Mrs. Raske. Great holiday story. Keep up the good work.

great story and I want all 3, MILF, MOM AND FRIENDS, just do it!

Is one of the BEST incest story that I've ever read...

Please continue on with more chapter...

Vote 6 if I can...

Well written easy to read... In my estimation this is so far the best Christmas story...

I enjoyed the character interaction Matthew and Sandra at home before the party...

The interaction between Sandra and her two submissives' Beth and Della added to the story... Finally when Matthew takes control of his sister and the way he did it was very interesting.... The sequence of the followup to the "Best Present Ever" should be as follows (1) Sister's Friends, (2) MILF Neighbor, and (3) Mom...

again I would like to say this was a great story...

I loved this story. My vote is the mom. Please keep the story going.

I cum twice and I ate both of them because I got so turn on.