All Comments on 'Best Present Ever: Bitch Sister'

I'm greedy I want all three stories, maybe he can get sis to do dad while does mom, just a thought.

Great story. Would love to read sisters friends next!

It's a toss up - Sister's Friends or MILF Neighbor. Either one is fine, just be sure to do both! Loved the story, now please continue.

Great story! Sisters friend is my vote

you're on a roll. sister's friends next. good stuff

Great story, I vote for sisters friend(s)

Loved the story . Hope you will continue. Would like to see many more chapters. Thanks

I would love for this too contnue, it hits all my fetishes minus squirting in one story!!

An apology to Estragon my great editor...I saw his edit...thought I fixed it, but clearly didn't...a new edit is being sent to fix the error...

Thanks all for reading...and your support...

Jasmine

it would seem like a Logical way to go and easier to Accomplish then the Next Door Neighbor and Last but Mot Least Mom.

She got what she deserved. I'll smash the sister friend next. That accent haunted his fantasies too long.

I also think it should go friends milf and then mom with revenge on the bully to boot making him know his mom is a slut to someone he used to beat up

For the love of all that's perverted, please write the rest of this series. I think it should go- sisters friends first. He can build up his dom side here and get is harem. Then the milf story. That way he has more expirence with older women and can learn about the plan to get his mom He can also get his revenge on the bully. . Then mom and he can become the new head of the family.

Thanks again and five stars.

Asking us to vote for the next chapters is a great idea. I vote for the MILF as his next conquest. This chapter was a fun read, well written and flowed nicely. Thank you.

That's no place to stop.. love that story.. Keep going

very well written. please continue with more stories. start anywhere you like.

love it, would love to read sisters friend next, followed by milf then mom

Loved the story! It was very hot...it was great to jack-off to!!!

Would love to read about Mom (1), MILF neighbor (2), and sister's friends (3)!

Deacon

A mouse that roared after nearly 20 years of wussiness? And with an 8 inch plus? Common, man...

Great story. My choices are 1) MILF 2) friends 3) Mom

1 neighbor

2 friends

3 mom

4 neighbor and mom

5 sister and friends

Really enjoyed that and want more so please do sumbit:

1 Neighbour

2 Friends

3 Mom

Superb

Friends first then the mild in frount of loser of a son....skip mom

I vote for this one but any you wrote would be great

sex scenes could be more intimate. I vote for the slut's friends

1 Best Present Ever: MILF Neighbor

3 Best Present Ever: Mom

2 Bets Present Ever: Sister's Friends

Definitely looking forward to this series continuing (in any order, but I guess I'd vote for Bets Present Ever: Sister's Friends)

OOooo....that was HOT! I think sisiter's friends since tyhey are already slaves & willing....then MILF neighbor to help seduce Mom

Please!

I wood like to read them in MILF Neighbor. xoxo your way

Loved it!! Very well written & so many possibilities to continue on with. Looking forward to more!

Any Order you prefer, although the suggestion of mom and the neighbor does sounds intriguing. I am looking forward to seeing more.

That was a great start to this series. You can write any of the three chapters first and then follow it up with the next one until all three are written. You have started a great series about Matthew, and how he becomes sexually active and dominating over his sister and others.

My sister came to my bed and let me finger her when she was 23 and I was 19. Eight years later, when she was in the middle of a messy divorce, she and I fucked for the first time. Damn, it was good.

Great story need to do all three, any order

The next chapter should have BOTH Mom and the neightbor together and getting caught by Matthew and to protect their reputations, both become dominated by him.

In fact, here is the edited version I sent to the author:"“Ta-ta-ta, my baby sister,” I teased, snapping off a few more pictures, including a couple of close-ups of her cum-coated face. “You do remember who is in charge, don’t you? These are just for posterity. Although they may also come in handy if you decide to not be the obedient little slut I expect you to be.”

Apparently the author disagreed with my edit. Would hardly have been the first time. Perhaps the author thought "prosperity" opened the door to future blackmail. Que sais-je?

As for the anonymous commentator who said that this could never happen in RL, how does s/he know? How much would s/he have bet in September that Joe Paterno would not be fired by Penn State before season's end? Had someone written a story in June 2010 about Penn State's football program being a center of child molestation, they would have been laughed to hell and back. Truth is invariably stranger than fiction.

I would love to read this next Best Present Ever: Mom, and that was a great story of the bitchy sister.

This should be a series much more to cum I hope!

Also enjoyed the humour of the 23rd film night!

great story, but unless he is going to sell the pictures for money, they would be for posterity - not prosperity. Loved it though. Please write more!

It has to be MOM.

Logically, sister's friends would be next as they plan how to get the MILF neighbor, who then helps in seducing Mom on New Year's Eve :-D I don't suppose the neighbor is a teacher, is she???? <wink> LOVED IT!!!!

--J

sis's friends

milf neighbor

mom(she can be the new years conquest)

really good story though

That was so hot. I can't wait to read all three. My pussy is quivering in suspense.

Excellent bit of writing and just long enough to get the reader interested in more.

As usual another great story, I think a MILF story would be great for the next one.

This was a very hot story and I think you should write more. I think the other three stories you listed should be your next pieces of work. Good job n keep the stroke stories coming!

there is no way this would ever happen in any stretch of the imagination. he would never go back if he had to put up with a bitch like her keep it atleast somewhat realistic or put it in the fantasy area. a guy like that would have found a job so he could have a reason to stay at college and skip the holidays and summer typical trash for this site we need better writers.

Would enjoy all 3 tales ,come ahead with them

Bets Present Ever: Sister's Friends

I think that you need a good master yourself. That would be your best present ever. On the whole not bad at all you get a 5 from me (slut)

milf, friends then mom than maybe a full blown fuckfest with everyone

The logical progression is friends, neighbor and mom. If the stories continue to be written this good I will read them regardless of who gets done next.

I really liked this story. I hope we get to see Matthew get Sandra's friends next. I look forward to it. Just don't take TOO long.

Friend that will be sexy

I would definitely read all three!

Sister's friends.

MILF, definitely!

Friends then milf

Loved the stockings/garter aspects they helped me too. Nice one darlin'

Looking forward to the next one

xx

MILF next plse

Friends, then Milf finally mom

Next sets: friends, neighbor, mom, group - excellent read!

Always enjoy reading your stories and the next three in this series will be very interesting reads...... looking forward to reading all three of them.

What a combo, incest and reluctance!

next please best friends

Sisters friends definitely

Great story as normal

Next please- Best Present Ever: Sister's Friends

I vote for Best Present Ever: Sister's Friends