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Click hereBy the time she returned to the tip there was a tiny droplet of pre-cum visible there and, after a momentary hesitation, she tenderly licked it into her mouth and seemed to be absorbed in the process of experiencing the unfamiliar taste. I must have been holding my breath -- I hadn't been aware of it -- but I know I exhaled noisily when she did that; and then I gasped loudly when she drew part of the purple helmet into her mouth before, after another hesitation, closing her lips around the whole of it.
I could feel her sucking gently; could see that she was clearly frightened of catching her teeth on such a tender part but, as her confidence grew a little, she started to gently bob her head up and down just a little way until I wanted to scream out loud with the sheer intoxication of the moment.
If it had been anyone else, I probably would have left her to continue until I was ready to explode into her mouth but, if it had been anyone else, I wouldn't have felt the way I did at that moment. So, after relishing a few moments of those ecstatic feelings, I carefully reached down, drew her head away from it, and brought her back up to stand with me.
"I'm sure I can do it, Jack," she told me with a concerned look on her face, "I'm sure I can do it for you... really. I'm sorry if I wasn't...."
"It felt perfect, Penny," I whispered, "And I know that you will. But I want to wait until you're ready to do it for us... not just for me."
As I finished speaking, I carefully wrapped my arms around her and began to ease us both onto the bed. Even then, I could sense that she was relieved that I'd allowed her just to begin an exploration rather than pressing her to complete it. The feeling was clear in the loving tenderness of her kiss and the lack of resistance when we stretched out, side by side and as close together as it's possible for two bodies to be and, once more, I began to explore her delicious body.
Her responses to every touch were immediate and unrestrained but, before going further, a sudden thought sprang, uninvited, into my mind. I stopped what I was doing and said:
"I just need to get my jacket. I think it's in the kitchen."
"Why?" she breathed.
"Condoms," I replied, "I've got some in my...." But she tightened her arms around me and refused to let me move.
"We don't need them, Jack," she whispered.
"But... you said...."
"There's no point..." she murmured, "...not when I'm already pregnant!"
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Lovely story - my third reading and loving every minute.
Let's get one detail right. For "juvenile offenders' institution" read Borstal. That's the word he would have used.
Yeah I know, fictional characters, writer's imagineering but so many reader are so quick to condemn others, whether fictional or real. And so slow to express compassion or forgiveness for other peoples foibles. Thus expressing their own inner turmoil and self-hatred for the pain and suffering the castigator caused to the real people in their lives.
What talent you have if this is indeed your first story. It is well written and composed with a full bodied language and I just love your quirky humour.
Very much looking forward to further work.
Work and family commitments make it difficult for me to spend much time here and even less for actual writing.
I have made a start on what will be the final chapter of THIS adventure which, I hope, will answer many questions. It is unlikely to answer them all, however, because I've developed a perverse liking for these characters which means that, sometime in the future, I hope to return to them.
Once again, many thanks for the comments - and the e-mails - both encouraging and otherwise. I really do appreciate your feedback.
Chapter 5 caught my attention simply because of the category. I couldn't recall reading earlier chapters so I went back to ch. 1 to see if it was familiar. It is always a pleasant surprise to find a well written story, and this one is surely that. You are a good storyteller as well, as apparently I'm not the only one who has made it to chapter 5. Thank you and I hope there is more to this tale
I don't know what story you're reading - but this one makes it VERY clear that she hadn't lied at all - and that he was saying sorry for jumping to the WRONG conclusions.
As others have said, I'm not sure a chancer like Jack really deserves someone as good as her - but I hope we'll find out.
However if this is the end it was very unsatisfying. We'll see...
Thanks for sharing looking forward to more submissions from you.
there is more! As complete as is his commitment, Penny has not yet shown that (no more than was given back in Chapter II.) Also, there has been no revelation of Jack's willingness to explore his talent to the fullest. There is so much more in this nugget!!!
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It's been a very good series and exciting and enjoyable to read .
Thanks for the story
My heart pumps strongly for a reprobate like this (coulda been me, except for living in Merry Olde England and having talent, albeit squandered!) Great story (whether over or not!)
5*
that this the final chapter. There are still several 'loose ends' and I think you're too good a writer to leave them dangling.
Whether it is or not, I've thoroughly enjoyed the story and it's well worth every one of the 5*!
I just really, really liked this chapter. Thanks for the entertaining tale.
It sounds as if Jack is very human and considering the path he has walked worthy of Penny, Morton and the rest of the property. Nice plan that he worked out for Norah's money.