All Comments on 'Bewildered Cheating Wife'

@Tw0Cr0ws LOL! I hope he divorced her.......

I say add another chapter. I for one would like to see what the writer decides to with the cheating pair. How the two who got cheated , how they handel the aftermath , do they stay married ?

Liked the flow of the story and, I agree, it needs a stronger finish.

Thanks for a fine effort.

Never, not once have I read where the cheated husband, after being humiliated in front of a crowd, so humiliated his unfaithful wife. This is crying out for some kind of sequel. Jim is out for revenge. Those pictures could go to family and other friends. He's already been destroyed at the party; now he could totally destroy her. What would her reaction be? Why did she do it? Would she try to make amends? Would he accept any kind of rapprochement? Do they have kids? What would be their situation? You could take this a hundred different directions. You should go for it.

A friend of mine had an uncle that walked in on his wife cheating with another man, he handed the guy $2 and told him to go get something better.

@EgoTrixie

Real life is strange, there's no telling what a person will do. There are a lot of possibilities.

Jimi boy may decide to make Viki a full time hooker

He may decide to ship her off toa life of slavery in Mexico

He could turn around after tapping Martha's ass and take a crowbar to Mikey's genitals

The story is only half baked, there are a lot of holes in the plot and Jim looks like he has some brains. I hope there's a sequel and he does something creatively nasty.

@Ego Trixi It may be the Author is not a Francis Macomber or a Longhorn07, but the half story has some humorous original idea. Yes an epilog had increased the story's value.

But the flow of the eternal cuck stories this story is a good anti boring alarm. Not only the comment section is readable.

No black and white outcome, but we don't need to know what happens next. I'm sure we can imagine. Tell us in another chapter if you like. Although I suspect some readers still won't understand.

...this story i s as bad as claimed. No man would react the way Jim did. Apart from that it is hard following the script. Nothing like this would actually happen in "real life" - wife and guest leaving for several hours, come back the way they did...and nothing but "low-IQ"-dialogues...

No thanks...not worthwhile continuing.

This is a good start to a longer story. The protagonist has burned his wife and Mike in the worst possible without laying a finger on either of them. He also gets to fuck Mike's wife and follow through with a divorce later if he so wishes. And seeing that it's friends, neighbours and co workers at the party Tori and Mike won't have much of a reputation or job left in very short order.

No more like this.

Stories like this keep me checking into this site every day. All of us who had wives that cheated and divorced us and took all our hard earned money need these stories of revenge on the bitches. In real life the courts have us by the balls and there is nothing we can do. Years later we can relieve our hatred of women in tales such as this. Call it the Brotherhood of Once a Cuckold if you like, but we have made a stand to fight cheating wives past, present and future to the death! Stories like this inspire us and give us the grit we need. Five thusand stars!!!!!

needs and ending

She cheated on the spur of the moment, so will he. Makes a good example of her by referring to her as a call girl and, strikes while the iron is hot; with the other guys wife. Quick way of balancing the books... lol

That sucked. No tension, no drama and the dumb motherfucker didn't know she hung the horns on him til he saw her hair mussed? Not a well done story and please don't feel like you owe us more. This was quite enough.

Ok, definitely needs to fuck Martha in front of her then make her eat the cream pie.

Definitely made worse by the fact that she did things with the other guy that she wouldn't do with him.

Definitely should kick her to the curb with as little as he can legally get away with - unfortunately no-fault divorce laws protect cheaters, she should really get nothing.

I could see taking Martha and leaving the slut there but what ever.

Does Jim do The ultimate and get a divorce. She had sex at the spur of the moment, destroying her marriage, sleeping with mikes wife is not the place to go,since mike doesn't seem To care. So you left us hanging with an incomplete story. So. Please finish .. I would never give her another chance to cheat on me after she admitted what she did so nonchalantly . .

and doesn't mean back pay. TK U MLJ LV NV

pieces of shit like her and the asshole belong in hell

Another mud bath. Once he got the admission and the evidence - all in front of his friends - there is no reason to continue the marriage. His wife is a pig. If she did this once she probably did it before and will do it again. She is not just his girlfriend. She is his life partner and future mother of his children. She has proven herself unfit for both titles and must be removed from those roles before she has a chance to do some real damage. Sadly, it is as simple as that - if she was an employee she'd be fired.

Thanks, 5 stars. a fun little trip, and no jail for hubby. No doubt he kicked her to the curb when he had done humiliating her.

A little awkward at times.

Great writing and unique plot!! This story really has legs for another chapter. Maybe he could make enough on his wife's pussy to retire Without her.,,

But the guy she fucked paid not her;).

Good flash story. I like characters who did gold from shit, who change a bad situation to better life circumtansis.

Kind of funny, actually. I hope he sent the pictures to her family. That would really be funny. Ha Ha

Interesting reaction with little depth to the story.

But I think the ending was a little flat... I would have preferred it if he outrighted called her a whore "Well, if she's going to be a whore, you should pay her like one."

And I think if he made it clear that he wanted the photos for the divorce, after sending them to himself... that'd complete the BtB of it. At the moment, it's not incredibly clear what he will do, we're assuming.

Otherwise, it's a good flash story.

That was different. Did not see that cumming!

I liked how the wronged husband would not be deterred from exact, sordid truth despite evasions and bluffs by two cheaters. No violence but payback was obtained. Definite winner on flash story level. ****