All Comments on 'Beyond the Borderline Bk. 02'

I admit I skipped a lot of the story but I didn't skip the last page.so I have to ask Jose how he abused dee?he didn't drag her kicking and screaming to bed,she came to him after their mom died and she even had permission from her to be her dad's new lover if she could convince him to accept her.

Bravo! What an epic. I was entranced by every page, absolutely AMAZING read. Thank you

A 5⭐️ story to a 1⭐️ story as soon as Jen and Gina got together ,, I quite reading it from there. How could she cheat on her husband/son that way ????

After the way he loved her in part 1 and after 4 kids ,,, sad turn of events

😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖😖

Such a wonderfull epic journey, your story managed to produce a lot of emotions. This is one that will stick with me for a long time. Thank you.

Unfortunately I had to give up on this half way through book 2. Primarily due to the fact that this was headed from a romance to an extended stroke story. Way too over sexed for the main premise. I quit just as Gina entered the story and glad I did. I have to agree with many of the comments below. Far too many authors take this route, maybe to satisfy what they think people want. This would have been much.more palatable if kept to the romance and family aspect. Sorry, only one star from me.

Beautiful love story!

(3/31/2023)- I almost didn't read this story due to the length of both parts. I don't like a story that is 3 pages long because it's difficult to set up a story in a short length. But i don't typically like them long either as i feel i will lose interest. And after reading the first page of Part 1, i had a feeling it would end as a tear-jerker. But I'm glad i did. It took me several days to finish both parts but it was well worth it. And after reading some of the previous comments, i now see why the overall rating is not higher. But, to each his/her own. I would just say to CPBaudelaire to take heart. You can't...please...everyone. As with Part 1, the dialogue here was Top Notch. I enjoyed immensely every Aspect of this story. The creativity is Awesome. I enjoyed All of the characters. Even the tryst between Jennifer and Gina did not bother me as Gina and her son became part of the "family" instead of just casual aquaintances. And as Ricky explained to Dee Dee at the last, Jen's and Gina's relationship was more Spiritual than sexual anyway.

And speaking of Spiritual connections, the author made at least 2 references to a "higher power" in this story. Both involved Emily and prayer. Once when she was born and needed surgery and the second was when she was injured in the accident. Also in reference to the accident, Emily told her mom and dad about her "revelation" in talking with "Uncle Alain" while she was unconscious. I especially loved those.

Finally, i loved the "Southern connection" developed through Gina and her son, Paul. Being raised in the deep South, I personally appreciated all of those Y'alls.

As the author stated, this was his first submission. It is obvious that it took a great deal of work and time to write this. I thank him for this story and the editorial assistance he received. 5🌟 for a Great job.

This is nothing short of an amazing composition!

I have read through about 40 of the reviews, and must say, despite how good of a read it was, that I agree with several of the readers who gave reviews of the story.

1. While it was also a hot interlude, Jen's afternoon with Gina was truly being unfaithful despite permission, because Rick states clearly several times throughout the story that Jen's the only woman for him, and has no sexual desire for ANY other woman.

2. The prospect of Jason having sex with Jen would essentially have been Jen's cuckolding of Rick.

3. Although it was done in the interest of love, the inclusion of Deidre seducing Rick after Jen's death was a bit tasteless, but this is a story of incest, now isn't it?

4. At his core, Rick was a spineless man. Don't piss off mom, or I won't get laid again!

But then again, Jen really was really was a dominate bitch in her essence, wasn't she? Especially in book one.

At least in book two, Rick got all the sex and love he wanted, although she was still clearly in charge of the relationship. But Jen was a lawyer, and no wimpy woman would ever be a attorney. Only a strong willed woman would be.

No one else in their reviews touched on this at all, but during the morning after their amazingly sexy dinner and dancing date at the restaurant with the live band, Rick is now firmly headed toward ultimately satisfying his dreams. He and his mom were so hands on and sexual during the date, is it any wonder that he'd want to be sexually aggressive with his mom the next morning? He thought he was home free!

And what does she do with him then? Be a complete controlling bitch to him! I seriously about gave up the story at that point because it was such a let down. After all the build up with Jen stringing Rick along as she did, knowing fully how he felt, she denies him sex, yet again.

But overall, it was also a great development in the plot!

I admit it.....I was so pissed about the way she treated him, I was cheering him on when he was going to walk out of the house. I figured it might've put Jen in her place and made her really realise the depth of Rick's love for her.

But, I am glad I kept reading! Really glad!

I cried at the end, too. And, as an ardent fan of The Ghost Whisperer, during the part of Emmy's relating Alain's words to her right after the horrible accident. Truly touching!!

Thank you for a truly meaningful read!

Sincerely, B4PW.

Well, the totality of it is kind of hard to parse out. There's a lot of love in this story,.. and a lot of fucked up stuff too. Jen and Rick's relationship was never equal. She was always the dominant, because of her nature, and because he embraced her nature, and let her be that. Was her relationship with Gina cheating, as some have suggested? She was certainly willing to knowingly cuckold him with Jason. Even though Rick approved of both those things... But the biggest betrayal, to me, is that Jen didn't tell Rick anything about Dee's love for him. To me, that's unconscionable. As a spouse, there should be no secrets between you. Jen was quick to be open to having sex with Jason, but kept even the possibility of Rick and Dee from ever even being discussed. That, in my opinion, is fucked up.

And the kids were fucked up, too, Jason got the hots for his Mom, but out of respect for his Dad or something, decides not to fuck her. Then he feels her up in front of his Dad and his wife? What kind of respect is that? Fucked up. And poor Dee, fucked up. And poor Emily, feels like she needs to become a priest to all these incestuous people? Fucked up. And then all the preaching and propaganda about how great these incestuous relationships are? That's transparently fucked up. So, a lot of fucked up stuff, amongst the love that was also there. And poor Rick was always fucked up, he loved that crazy bitch so much. Fucker never had a chance!

You know, I read these incest stories for the pure love that is often in them. That's fantasy, I reckon. But this one, while there was a lot of love there, for sure, there was just too much fucked up stuff for it to be satisfying for me. Maybe that's more like real life, I don't know. But if it is, then to me this story is more an argument against incest, than for it. Too much fucked up stuff resulted, all the way down the line. Jen strated out seeming like a pretty wise and responsible parent. In retrospect, she should have stuck with that and kept on doing the right thing.