by silkstockingslover
And I loved it. The stories in the works sound great too. This could definitely be a hot series. But I was hoping for a bit more of one-on-one debauchery between just mom and son first. 5*.
The tale of a kid swimming around in his father's sloppy seconds. One of your worse stories.
This is like all of your other stories😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍.I mean this fabulous magnificent!!!!!!!!! I play with my cock the whole time I was reading!!!!!!!!!!!! I definitely hope there more.💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
Fucken great story by one of the best out there! Keep those sequels cumming!!
Amazing story! Please keep writing more parts. Easily one of the best ive read and its only the first of hopefully many.
I can’t wait to read more but please don’t bring the dad back in the story. The story was best when it seemed he was trying to be a better master then his dad
Hope to see him find some of his own conquests in the up coming stories and to see how depraved he gets with his own mother
I always enjoy ready your stories, they are entertaining and fun.
I just ask, please keep the dad out! I'd be happier if the soon found the middle ground and didn't wind up being an asshole like his sperm donor. In fact, let's have him ban dad from his harem completely!
Admittedly I could only get 3 pages in before I had enough. This read like it was written by a 14 year old who just discovered sex. Muh big fat cock gets all the ladies to my treehouse!
Yeah I know you said the title should've clued us in, seriously it was too much. I've read some of your other stories and they weren't written like this. I've never read any of your bbc cuck stories though so maybe they are written like this?
Seems like a poor attempt for a halloween contest story that really didn't have anything to do with Halloween.
This is the kind of hot story I've come to expect from silkstockinglover........
I can't wait to learn more about Ms Chan! Patient and Wise (Asian); great Wisdom for Kevin.
Very enjoyable story, and your proofers are doing a great job with your submissions.
A+
very well done silkstockingslover
Jas, although it gave me feelings of inadequacy because I have just the average male appendage, I still loved it because of all the action Kevin got. As with many of your stories, it was too long (unlike me - lol). I solved that by taking 3 days to read the entire story - 2 pages the first day and four each the second and third days. Do you anticipate readers doing that? It seems so because each place I stopped seemed to be a perfect place for a pause. Nonetheless, I'd like you to consider breaking tales like this one into 3 or more chapters. Just my 2 cents worth. But, now that I've discovered how to break it up myself, maybe it's unnecessary. Having the equivalent of Kevin's stable of willing women is my dream. Too bad my smaller package won't have the same impact and effect. Ah well, such is life! Definitely a 5-star work!
Due i love this story and i hope to keep reading about kevin as i love the entire cast. Keep up the amazing work
I would love to see the son have his diploma revoked and he has to fuck both his principal and his lesbian teacher while attending adult school to get his GED. I also want to see Jasmine Walker get fucked too. With that being said the story you wrote was great!
what a truly great story, can't wait for more. you are my favourite author jasmine and can't wait for lots more stories from you
You are the very best. You manage to keep it building to the very end. 5*.
My cock has been hard most of the time reading this story i love having sex with my motherinlaw while my wife watches,then she joins in. I would love to read all of the extra story subheadings i am pretty sure I would be hard reading each one.
Please don’t pay any attention to the negative comments. Your filthy mind gets me hard every time. Keep up the good work. You are my favorite author on here.
Amazing story. Keep them coming. Love the amount of detail you include. Like that it is not wham bam thank you mam. Love the nylon fetish is a central focus and not a brief mention.
It's good. A bit too much ego. You've written so much good stuff, that this is just a bit less compared to most of your other work.
Your stories are always amazing, loved this one and hope to see the rest of the Big Fat Cock series soon!
Please let me have it I want to stay in touch with you and want all the updates please give me that
“Big Fat Cock: A Hot Mommy Seduced” is another in the amazing repertoire of SilkStockingsLover’s collection of stories. I can’t wait for her next chapter in the “The Big Fat Cock” series. Thank you.
The only thing that would have made this hotter is it being one of your wonderful illustrated stories!
Please don't make moral claims about the society or sexuality . This is enjoyable read but when you go about how men and women are and should act it becomes annoying . Keep it firmly in fiction section don't try to prescript behavior or make truth claims .
I am just saying you have shallow porn level understanding of sexuality and society if you really think those claims about what women and men want has any practical value . You are a great porn writer .
As a man that was blessed with a BFD, I gotta say you nailed the stigmata. Looking forward to more chapters!
This was an excellent read, both my partner and I love your stories and always have a great love making session afterwards, keep the stories coming
You write an amazingly hot story, give us titles of possible sequels, then if you do ever write them, we have to wait months or years to get them. By the time you get around to writing the sequel, I have to reread the original just to understand the references back to the original. Its annoyingly frustrating!
Thank you for writing amazing stories. I've just killed an hour at work. I really look forward to the next offering you bestow upon your loyal readers.
This is your best non-sequel story in a while. Loved the build up to the mom and all the adventures available. You need to do a follow-up quickly. Don't wait like you usually do. The next chapter should include Ms. Chan eating mom's pussy preferably after a load was deposited. And Mrs. Grady being Dommed by Kevin in front of his mom.
its cool and i love it but didnt like the religious part about islam, and thank you keep the good work
You're stories are great. This is just so good. Its really hot and has a fantastic build up. I hope the follow up stories happen. Thank you for sharing your gift.
Honestly the best I have read in awhile. Great story line, graphic details and kept me fully engaged the whole time! Can't wait to read the sequels!
Your stories are all good and this one is a nice addition to your library. Slow seduction and build up to the final Climax is the best way to go. Each of your follow up ideas will be sensual and add to this one. Voyeuristic sex could happen in several cities along their trip. They might give thoughts to other women and sons or daughters because of watching them in their exhibitionism loving.
I was beginning to wonder if you were moving away from hot hosiery stories, but you came back in a big way. I would love to hear about the Harvard visit and the lesbian teacher.
Although im not into submission. This is one of my favorite stories. So very well written.
I love your work. I always have. It's rare that I read incest; it's usually done unrealistically. Also, I was hoping that this had a sequel, so I was excited that you had not just one, but several. I need to vote on this, even if it's too late I STILL need to vote.
I've read many of your works and I've enjoyed all of them but on this one I think you over did it a little. I ran out of interest in the plot along about the 3rd or 4th chapter. To long for one thing and to over the top for real erotica lovers like me. I like it when you are more seductive with your writings where you keep me on the edge of my seat right up till the time the seduction becomes reality. Fine line between reality and fiction but you've done it before in your stories. I suggest you get back to shorter versions that are not so long . This one was to long and drawn out to hold my attention. I'm not a critic nor am I a writer like you but you have more talent than you showed in this one. Sorry just telling you what I think doesn't mean you have to take my advise tho I hope you will.....
A fantastic read, the build up was great, kevins conquests along the way made for a good build up. Mrs Chan deserves his big fat cock in her cunt for her sagely advice. Excellent story as always. I will keep cumming back to this one
The getting someone pregnant is not interesting.
Please continue this series.
The principal the teacher and all the story ideas sound great.
Keep kevin from being a very young father.
Great story also
This was one of thee best reads I have ever imagined.. I seen everything unfold in my mind ... great story oh how I can wait to read everything else
I like that this obviously has a end game..i wonder what is next?
I would LOVE the follow up story of Dumb Blond Cheerleader, Harvard Orgy and last but not least Lesbian Teacher
All of those I would love all of them have great potential imo, Would be best if you would do them all 3 hehe ;)
PS Great story !
Wow! It looks like you might have found your next series. I know sequels are difficult but I for one know you should write all of the suggested titles.
5 Stars somehow seems lacking for this one.
Please write the sequels you listed. I look forward to reading every one.
In the end, when Kevin finds his one true love, please make sure he still pleases and satisfies mom. His true love must understand and allow it.
very fucking hot loved it like all your stories .. really looking forward to the continuation of this
As always another great story. I love all your stories and so look forward to all the sequels you listed. PLEASE GET WRITING......we are all waiting.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, it tickled every corner of my dirty mind. Keep up the great work!
I thoroughly enjoyed the story and how it came about. The sex scenes where amazing and the overall feeling of what his harem could become was great.I loved the attitude change where he was this shy guy who couldn't talk to having the narrative simply toss out he visited a person to blow a load so dismissively.
That said one of my biggest issues was the amount of sex scenes vs the length of the individual scene. I get that it was showing that he had on demand pussy at has fingertips (or cocktip to be exact) but I think it would have been better to reduce the amount of encounters and increase the individual encounter.
That lead up to the final encounter in which I was hoping excepting to read as he turned mommy dearest into his 3-hole slut instead of it being implied that he rode her into the sunset, instead of it being the potential sequel.
Overall I enjoyed the story, hope you continue it and I've read many of your other stories and thoroughly enjoyed them. It feels like you have such a love for the genres you write for that it makes your stories that much more enjoyable to read (besides the fact that their fucking hot).
Thanks for the story.
My first story to review for the contest and I get this one - wow! Great stuff, wonderful dialog and plot, wide variety of characters. Keep it up!
Honestly your best work yet. Starts slow but quickly goes to full on submissive milfs begging for cock in their asses and cum in their mouths.
Really hoping you update this or daughter's initiation soon
Great! I NEED a continuation:
The Grady-Story at his home
Ms Chan and the mother
the Muslim Slut and the lesbian teacher at the same time
the principle (rough)(No, really rough)
everything else you think of....
Thanks!
Wonderful story, great builtup,
Would love to read:
Harvard Orgy
Hot Principal
Interracial Incest 3some (maybe combine that with impregnation?)
and mostly the Lesbian Teacher Story
Everything with the father son fuckfest bonding was wonderful. I ate that shit up. I would love to read the continuing adventures of Kevin. But I’m personally not into mother fucking incest which is the bulk of the story.
but i believe to long for a contest reading, should be limited to Five pages
Wow more please, all the potential for a number of stories, loved it start to finish. My P.O.V. you go, girl, what a wonderful imagination.
NorthPacific
One thing that really struck me was that the narrator's vocabulary and ability to articulate what was happening, with reduced ability to come up with good metaphors, and early on to think of varied adjectives during sex.
Given that the narrator is normally excellent at those things, I think this choice is absolutely masterful as an author. It really puts you in the head of the character, in a way that surpasses dialogue and other more traditional ways of communicating a character's state of mind. It's a true testament to your ability, and, having read some of your earlier works (all solid 5-star works of art, mind you), your growth as a writer. And not just any writer, but one of the most prolific and consistently talented incest/taboo authors on all of Literotica.
I'm anxiously looking forward to reading about more of Kevin's adventures, especially BFC: Double Penetration Fun, as I really would love to watch him make love to Ms. Chan, and BFC: Hot Principal, since it's always great to see a bitchy, uptight woman experience her sexual awakening. I'm really not fond of the idea of Kevin ending up with someone other than his Mom as his main partner, though (not that every story has to include a bunch of scenes with her; just so long as he doesn't go off and get married and move out)
Also, I'm thinking maybe the way he gets the principal should have something to do with him conspiring with his Mom to seduce her during some sort of meeting to discuss a Harvard scholarship or exchange program, or take time off school so he can enroll in distance learning courses at Harvard, something along those lines. Basically anything that would have him and his Mom meeting with the principal in private while in keeping with his intelligent, nerdy, honors-student character. Just a thought, but feel free to use any or all of it if you want. Don't worry about crediting me for the idea or anything like that if you do end up using it. I just want to read more of your amazing stories!
It was overall very good, but I found characters repeating the phrase “That, you are” or “That, I am” often and it just felt like awkward filler dialogue after some point.
Cringiest thing I've read in while. Couldn't even get passed the first few pages
I really enjoyed it, all the side stories n the final reveal. I love all your stories.
I loved the story once the ball got rolling and he was on the boat with his father. It felt like it dragged before that, but once it hit that point I just couldn't stop reading it. Narrative was great, as is a vast majority of your work. Grammar was borderline perfect, with nary a line that jarred me out of the story. I really want to see more about this story line, I would be happy to see you write pretty much every story you have listed. Although you are missing the Hawaii trip with dear old Dad, Portia and her sister, unless you plan to make that one a minor story in one of your major arcs.
please kill that father. I am a man and men that act like that should be castrated.
This was got to the extreme you need to finish the other parts please
I love all your stories and this was particularly good and needs to be continued! An idea for the principle and the cheerleader you could roll those together. You already set up a pretty good reason for him to be called to the principles office in that he keeps being late to school. Once there when she asks why he has been late have him take out his cock and frankly say because i have been getting this seen to. After they do it he could go to the school showers and clean up and runs in to one or more cheerleaders and they could see him naked then he could fuck them right then then or one at a time at his leisure later or as a group.
For me your story started slowly and picked up steam quickly. I agree with another reader and you should definitely eliminate William. Looking forward to all your new episodes about Kevin and Mom and his new experiences.
Would very much enjoy hearing about him dominating his principal! Not enough stories like that on this site.
Your usual HIGH standards! Luv the way your sexy mind works. Thank you, Ed
the racist intersection feminist drivel from Ms Chen. Utter turn off.