Bill, We Need to Talk - 750 Words

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She tells her husband of her important decision.
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This very short story is submitted for the 750 Word Project 2024 as well as the Pink Orchid 2024 for Women-Centric Erotica Challenge.

Please note that the 750-Word Story Event features stories which are exactly 750 words long, the minimum length of stories allowed on this site. They tend to be narrow in focus and/or cover a short period of time. As such, they cannot provide the same degree of eroticism or fulfilling narrative as do longer and more traditional stories. Many writers here at Literotica enjoy the challenge of creating an entertaining or provocative 750-word story so please read, vote and comment with this in mind.

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"Bill, we need to talk.

"I know, I know every man fears those words but it won't change the fact that we need to talk. And I'm going to do all of the talking for now, so please, just hear me out.

"I've been doing a lot, and I mean a lot, of thinking here lately and I've come to a pretty big decision. I know it may not sit well with you, but it's for the best. You see, I'm thinking I might get involved with another man.

"I know this may be hard for you but before you go ballistic, please let me explain. OK?

"First, maybe I should remind you about my life. When we met, I fell head over heels in love with you. I couldn't believe how lucky I was and to this day I'm so glad that I met you and you fell in love with little ol' me, a girl from Topeka, who was still trying to get used to living on the coast.

"Remember, I was very naïve when we met. And when you asked me to marry you, I was the happiest girl alive. Remember our engagement night? I do. It was the first night I had ever slept with a man. Yeah, it was a little uncomfortable, but I willingly gave you what I could give to only one man and I'm forever glad it was you.

"Now, you never told me for sure, but I know you had slept with at least one other before me, maybe more. But the number isn't important. What's important is the fact that I've only been with one man my entire life. And that man is you.

"But I'm now beginning to wonder if that's the way it should be. Should I never sleep with another man? Should I go to my grave wondering about how another man would feel in me? Should I never know what it's like to love another man?

"I know you are probably upset with me, but please understand I love you. And I will always love you. I just want, I just need to know what it's like to be in the arms of another man.

"Now, you probably are wondering how or who or where this might all happen. And I'll be honest; I don't know yet. But there is a man, a man who might be the one.

"Who is it? Well, Kaylee's best buddy is Shannon; you remember her, don't you? Those two can't be peeled apart with a crowbar and they're on the soccer team together. I've met Jim, Shannon's father. He's very nice. Divorced. Apparently his ex-wife isn't in the picture much, if at all. We stand together at soccer matches and talk about the girls, the game and, of course, about ourselves. Jim's pleasant, polite and definitely not pushy. But I've gotten the idea he is interested in me, very interested in me. He seeks me out at the matches, he laughs at my lame jokes and listens, really listens to what I say, not like so many other men do.

"We haven't gone out or anything, except for one lunch. We were at a soccer tournament and he invited me over to the roach coach for tacos al carbon. They were pretty good, actually. Well, anyway, when we were walking there our hands bumped and I suddenly wanted to hold his, but he pulled back. You see, he respects me. I ended up holding his arm by his elbow but that was all the touching we've done. But I see it in his eyes: he wants me. A lot. Women know these things, Honey, they simply do. And I confess, I want him.

"But he's too much of a gentleman to push and I'll need to initiate things. And I believe, I am sure, he's a good one to explore this whole aspect of my life with.

"So, Honey, please understand that I need this. No one could ever replace you in my life but I don't want to die without ever having loved another man. So now I'm looking to you for your approval. I know you can't talk to me but please give me a sign and remember, I'll always love you."

A sudden, strong gust in the trees loosened a few maple leaves, one of which fell and snuffed out the candle sitting in front of the gravestone of "William Smith - Devoted Father and Loving Husband."

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I had difficulty choosing the best category for this unusual story and enlisted the help of several other authors who shall remain anonymous. All of them suggested this best fit in the Romance category. While the final decision was ultimately mine, I thank them for their input.

Trionyx - February 2024 Votes and comments are appreciated. Thank you.

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AlexFourwaysAlexFourways13 days ago

5🌟 Bit late to the party, but here goes.

I like the 750 word stories for a quick read. As we headed into the final two paragraphs, I thought his silence was indicating he couldn't reply and I wondered if he was in a terminal coma, and I suppose he is, sort of. The coma option would have meant she was still married, and the candle could have been a flat line. But still love your ending.

MorovarMorovarabout 1 month ago

You don't usually see this type of depth in a 750-word story. Loved the bittersweet ending. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

A true classic short story. Revealing character, with a plausible storyline with a huge, but realistic, twist at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Good one. A loving wife. Four solid stars.

JPB NOT BOB

I must add that the stories I have read in this exercise have been a disappointment,so I was considering not reading any more. Heck. I changed my mind.Five stars.

LechemanLechemanabout 2 months ago

Sad but sweet. Well done.

Rob_RoyaleRob_Royale2 months ago

Okay, ya got me. Totally suckered me in. Very well done.

DocWordsDocWords2 months ago

That was genuinely touching. Thank you for sharing it.

chytownchytown2 months ago

*****Makes one feel warm and fuzzy. Your use of 750 word are very touching. Good read. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Fearing the worst I was relieved to find that this story's placement in "Romance" was a good call.

That being said, the composition was quite well done and the plot development appropriate for the ending--though I must agree with mildcolonialboy that the candle snuffed-out candle left an unsettling ambiguous image in the mind.

Liked it, though. Please keep writing.

MLJ

mildcolonialboymildcolonialboy2 months ago

I liked this story, but I suspected from the start that her husband had died. People seeking permission from a dead spouse to move on is common enough in literotica (and real life). The ending seemed to me ambiguous, if we assume it is meant to be a message, is snuffing out the candle a yes or a no? Was this your intention?

oldmanbill69oldmanbill692 months ago

Tricky but nice.

usaretusaret2 months ago

You earned the last two stars in the last couple of sentences. Up till then, it was 3 stars. But your literary output twist cinched it. The surprise ending was very well done,

joy_of_cookingjoy_of_cooking2 months ago

Wow, what an ending! Read this out loud to my wife and we both sat around nodding our heads and muttering about how good it was. Thanks, five stars!

FandeborisFandeboris2 months ago

A bit Twilight Zone, but handled very well. Seems Mrs Smith is ready to move on.

lflyer82lflyer823 months ago

I wept at the end. Wonderful twist. Completely unexpected. Thank you..

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