Born Beautiful, Rachel's Story #02

Your stories are ALWAYS well written.

This one makes even a brazen old goat like me quite uncomfortable, but I have to say that some of the best authors I have read have made me very uncomfortable.

In my longish life I have come to the conclusion that all closed "societies" & "groups" that are dominated by males, whether religious (and I mean all religions), political, or a cult, many of the women and children are seriously abused in one form or another. Are there good men in this world that are not abusers and have no tolerence for it......sure....but looking at the entire world and its nations cultures, and societies as a whole, those good men are in a very small minority & back in the time frame Susan is talking about, it was far worse.

I can only echo the comments of Gemman before me. This chapter is clearly part of a larger story and context is important. On its own it may not be a quick thrill but I tend to find the writer rewards patience and background is often key to the things that come later. I'm sure that those of us who like Ms Parkers stories will look back at the story as a whole once it's complete and may have a different perspective by then. That said if you don't like it don't read it. I for one will continue reading.

For all of those readers who have never read any of Susan's other works, then read those also. She is superb at telling an Erotic Story. The build up is in many way more important then the rest of the story. You can also tell she puts her heart and soul into her stories and I for one enjoy her story telling ability.

So If you don't like the story,... then move on to another author...nuff said...

PBS recently ran a show about the Amish, the women in particular who suffering incestuous abuse. I suggest you watch it.

Moreover, if you know anything at all about the Amish and about the Mennonites, they don't lie and they don't tell stories.

As a survivor of incest myself, it takes one to know one and I know this women was sexually abused. All the signs are there.

There's no reason for her to make up things. She doesn't know the stories that I write. You're the one in the dark. You're the one in denial. My story represents a small sampling by showcasing one family of what went on on a farm in Germany in 1860 and still happens to day in 2012.

For you to be sitting there reading Literotica, especially incest stories and suggest that incest is not alive in well makes me question your sanity.

Thanks for reading my stories and for taking the time to make a comment. Instead of shooting from the hip, perhaps you should research your information before you make anymore of a fool of yourself.

in the community I live in. I was able to listen to a conversation about child molestation between the elders around here. Normally calm persons were ready to do serious damage to one member.

Perhaps she was telling you what she thought you wanted to hear, or her imagination was wild those/that day(s).

It could have happened as you say, but from my experience that person would not last long.

Facts? You want facts?

Having lived in Pennsylvania for a while now, I know quite a few Amish and Mennonite men and women. They aren't talkative about their personal life but I live in a house owned by a Mennonite woman and she tells me plenty.

She told me how her mother was sexually abused by her father and her brothers. She told me that she and here sisters were too. She told me that the reason why so many Amish and Mennonite women reject and flee that life is because of all the incestuous sexual abuse that goes on in the dark.

This isn't gossip, this is fact.

The most convincing argument for Amish and Mennonite people all looking simular is that there is a closed gene pool. The groups started small and grew from within. Not many wish to step backward in their lives.

Actually there are as many different looks in their community as there are in ours. The only difference being that the international influence of asians, chicano and black, among all the others is missing from their group.

There might be a few who act as you suggest, but I doubt it is out of line with the averages in the normal populations. If incest is exciting to you then be happy with your thoughts.

Just do not spout them as facts.

Thank you for reading, voting, and commenting on my story but being that this is only the 2nd chapter necessary to build the scene and develop the characters, you need to give the story a chance.

I don't write pornography. I write erotica. Being that this site is Literotica and not Literpornica, perhaps you should read another author that meets your descriminating taste for sex and disregard for history.

As history has a way of repeating itself, sex isn't a new concept to the 21st century. There was plenty of sex going on between a son and his mother, a father and his daughter, and a brother and his sister. This story is not just a snapshot of a brother having sex with his mother, it's the complete story or what happened on a lonely farm in Munich, Germany in 1860.

No doubt, what happened then still continues now. Just ask the Amish or the Mennonites. There's a reason why some of these people look so very much alike.

Thanks,

Susan

Is it good yes. but when writing you have to keep

your overall audience in mine.

Watching the history channel is not why I come to this site....