Break Up to Make Up

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"Let's go inside" Her voice was alert and sudden, as if she just discovered that there was indeed an "inside".

Thomas slipped out of her warmness with a disapproving grunt. Lynne quickly turned and stood. Immediately regretting the decision to stand so quickly, she stumbled and grabbed the edge of the hot tub.

"Shouldn't have stood so fast."

Forgetting about his erection with the change in circumstances, Thomas quickly grabbed her under her arms to help steady her. "We are too old for hot tub sex now? What's next? Too old for raves? Too old for all night sock hops?" He laughed at his own joke as they both stepped over the edge of the hot tub.

Lynne still looked a little queasy as she turned and looked at Thomas, "you're an idiot."

"I know."

They grabbed their towels and started drying themselves. Lynne leaned toward Thomas and placed a gentle kiss on his scruffy cheek.

"But you're my idiot."

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ctdansctdansabout 4 years ago
cute story

As usual in LW stories the woman is very quick to forgive and uses sex to show it. The guy, whatever he did, is forgiven and all is well.

Since he said he never strayed and wouldn't and they both agree this "issue" is all on him I wonder what the hell he did that was so close to ending what appears to be a great marriage?

Maybe this is more romance than LW?

But I liked it.

Thatguyoverthere744Thatguyoverthere744about 4 years ago
I liked it....

and I get it. You don't need to know what the argument was about in order to enjoy the story. That's the point.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
So what was the argument?

Where was the break up? This was nothing more than a sex scene.

SheiseverythingSheiseverythingabout 4 years agoAuthor

Thank you for your comments!!!

I left off the reason they started fighting on purpose, obviously. I did this mainly because I felt it was irrelevant to the true essence of the story. I didn’t want the the reader trying to decide if they should or shouldn’t be making up, if they should or shouldn’t had been so mad etc...

since the break up could be “relative” to the reader, I wanted to make sure every pair of eyes was on the same page... Nobody had an opinion of what Thomas had done, leaving our full attention on the make up sex and banter....

After making that decision, I thought it would also be neat to let the reader decide what he did wrong. ..

I truly don’t believe for one second that knowing why they started fighting in any way effects this short scene....

if it were a longer story, then clearly knowing why they started fighting would be more important but even then, not entirely 100% crucial.

We see stories all the time where people start off divorces or angry and we are never filed in to the reasons why....

Flar1958Flar1958about 4 years ago
No need

Sometime you have a fight to some little and its blow high. So high you think its break you apart. But after you calm there isn t worth a fight in itself. So you dont need the reason only the outcome. Real loving wife.

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