All Comments on 'Burn'

That’s the way to write a great BTB. Short, simple, and just plain satisfying.

Nice twist with the son at the end.

Nice.

Great btb story. Love the twist at the end.

Very nice twist!

One lucky Dad, except for the cheating ex. Well done story line and the way it was played.

Well written. Loved the interaction between the attorney and the detective. Very clever dialog. An entertaining 5. Thanks.

2nd read after a long time. Still 5*.

Good story,nice to read something a bit different.

Great stuff. The butler ...oops mean the son... did it in the conservatory with a baseball bat!

: I read this and rated it higher

well done!