Call Out Your Name Ch. 03

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It took a few minutes to blow out the candles and get the berth looking like we'd never used it, although I'm sure Carl knew of the rendezvous I'd planned. But if I left no sign we'd been here, he would be more likely to let me take the boat out again. So it was dusk by the time we found ourselves on deck, the sun setting behind us in a ball of orange as the lights on shore began to twinkle on.

"You're right, Shane," Jesse said, his head lying on my shoulder. "This is nice, a perfect view."

I gazed over at him. "My view is better." He understood what I meant and blushed.

"Tonight was really special for me." He took my hand. "I'm glad it was you I was with... that I waited. Thanks, you know?"

My voice got husky as I fought back tears, so overwhelmed by his sincerity. "You're welcome. It was special because of what you mean to me. And me to you. Because we're going to be together always."

He kissed me and switched back into his earlier Down Under accent. "You got that right, mate."

~*~~*~

(To be continued...)

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CuriousPeteCuriousPeteover 7 years ago
Great Story

Don't know why I hadn't found this earlier but better late than never. The characters are wonderful and the sex on the boat was very hot. Fearful about the stalker though. Hope he doesn't ruin a good romance.

melonhead94melonhead94about 11 years ago
Love it

They are so cute together. A perfect teenage couple and Shane is so romantic.

nuckin1futsnixnuckin1futsnixabout 11 years ago
M.A.S

god that Mumford and sons song selection was perfection sigh no more...i love this story and the pace is just right for these two i wish shane's mom was less of a bitch and his dad such a selfish prick but all in all a great story..sigh no more no more,one foot in sea one on shore,my heart was never pure...and you know me...you know me

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Practically sugar

that was soooo cute! and so well crafted. I loved that you let them take it slow and let them fall in love and other that other gooey squishy stuff. Really well planned and executed. hot stuff.

Bird_Man_RNBird_Man_RNover 11 years ago

Beautiful sex scene. It was very well written. I'm glad that you allowed Shane and Jessie to fall in love first.

valeroticyvaleroticyover 11 years ago

A nice, well-crafted story. You got me hooked.

BlueOleanderBlueOleanderover 11 years ago
Another Great Story Cliffgirl!

I am really enjoying this story. I was afraid after you pulled your other stories off Lit you would not post any more here and I would miss your work. I must admit, first time stories are my guilty pleasure! This one ranks up there in my top 10 list!

Thanks for all you do!

A

canndcanndover 11 years ago

It was a very sweet chapter. Shane really did a nice job planning their anniv. and the night for Jesse. Part of me knows that not many h.s. relationships last, but they really do seem to compliment each other well. The only thing that bothered me is why would you ever ignore a latter that is threatening to make you bleed? That just seems monumentally stupid to not decide to be better safe than sorry. But, I guess if they did get help, it would make it less dramatic when the bad happened. Look forward to more. Thanks for the quick posts.

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66over 11 years ago
Beautiful

They are so cute and how romantic a perfect anniversary

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