All Comments on 'Chinese Takeout Ch. 05'

I've read a lot of stories on Literotica and yours are the best. Waiting to read the next two chapters of Chinese Takeout. You are the best Chloe. Thank you.

Just to let you know what's coming up in order of release, over March / April / May I'm planning to hit you all with a deluge of 8 different stories on Literotica as well as getting two novels off to my publishers (the remaining two of the "Three Nights in Shanghai" trilogy and a third (the full length "Tales from Old Shanghai - Never Ending Love" self-published.

"Chinese Takout Ch. 06 - When I See You Smile"

"Happy Birthday to Me Ch. 06 - Playing With Fire"

"Jeong Park's First Frosh Ball Ch 05 - Another Saturday Night Part II" - asap

"Slave to Love" (for the April Fools Day Competition story)

"Midnight at the Villa Diodati" - for the Sunday March 17th Gothic Horror story event, “Beyond the Wall of Sleep”

"Glass Ceiling" - for the mid-April "On the Job" Story Event

"One Night in Xanadu" for the April 23rd "One Night in XXX" Story Event

"Timeo Artifices et Membra Virilia Denudens (Beware of Geeks Baring Dicks)" for the May 25 Geek Pride Day Story Event.

MORE! PLEASE!!!

Dutch

I'm writing up Chapter 6 now, a few more days.... that's all!

Heads down and well in... been reading thru the comments and I’ve promised this so many times that I’m not doing anything else until CT6 is online and before your eyes.

Chloe, shouldn´t be CT06 before anything else? EUR

Dutch

Looking forward to chapter 06. Love some of your other work as well

Dutch

Please post the next chapter... the build up is killing me! Love you writing and the Hu!

Thank you for both!

The Ol' Ladies at the Clubhouse are pissed at me. It's taken too long Cloe. We're gonna have to call it.

Dutch

Chapter 6? 7? 8? 9?

you are killing me!!! great story line, great research, GOT to have MORE!!!

Please.

Best story I’ve read so far! Can’t wait until chapter 6

its has been long long time .....im still waiting for next chapter ....great work .

still waiting for next great chapter ...I love it ..

Ellicia

This was great! I hope you get the chance to continue it!

Loved it, keenly awaiting the rest of the story, you can;t leave it there

A 6'6" 300 lb buff condom vendor picking up a Catholic school girl had me nearly rofl. Followed by getting hit on at the kitty kat. Wonderful, romantic firet time story. Looking forward to the "meet the parents" episode.

Well written good flow and a good insight into biker culture

Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Great story. Keep them coming.

I love the story and im still waiting. Please dont let it stop at here.

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Ellicia

Love the story. Please finish it, I implore you.

In know, I’ve been asked so many times not to leave this one hanging and I’m picking it up again. The real life Round Out is no longer available as my go to on bikers and biker lifestyle so I’m hanging a bit there - but it’s on the move.

Really hope you finish it.

Here's another fan of your writing... also waiting for conclusion to this one. How about posting your outline for final chapters so we know what happens and then we can all move on to your other stories- you to writing what you're inspired to write and us to enjoying the results.

Honestly, I hope you'll consider finishing this even if you don't have a source to consult. It isn't the biker aspect that draws me into this one. It's the likability and authenticity of Blue. If you focus on the relationships, I think you'll do just fine.

But if you've moved on from the project, I respect that. I know you're writing real books and I hope you have great success with that. Looking forward to your next project, whatever it happens to be.

I’m ex-Army, Married to wonderful Asian woman for almost 30 years, and ride an Indian. I’m not patched into any club but many friends are. You can imagine that with this background, your story is very high on my list of favorites. I have re-read it a few times and am always hoping to return and see another episode in the life of Round-out and Baby Blue. Please continue this wonderful story.

I really enjoyed this story and could tell the research you did with the real Round Out shaped the story detail really well.

I sure hope you will pick this back up and finish it for us. Loved it!

I’m a bit sad you just stopped this story a quarter of the way through. I was really enjoying it, and I didn’t even want it to continue for the sex, just the enjoyable story. I was really to see Jay-Lin’s family’s reaction to Keith, but it seems like that’s not happening anymore :(

I shouldn’t have commented before reading the other comments. I’m very excited to hear that you’re picking this series back up!

...to see the note at the end about chapter 6 and 7 forthcoming. I'm hooked. I hope that note is a lot more recent than 2016. If not, there should be a warning sign posted at the head of chapter 1: "Bridge Out. One Way Road. Dead End. Evil Lurks Ahead. Read At Own Risk." Except for that, I've loved it.

One criticism for your future reference. Having served in Viet Nam and Korea both, this one kind of jarred me a bit. You had the asshole calling Blue a gook slut, and Blue responding "Who the fuck are you calling a gook slut, asshole? I'm Chinese, not Korean." The term "gook" was used often in Viet Nam for the Vietnamese, and especially for the VC and NVA enemy, but I never heard it used in Korea for the Korean people. That's not to say that it never was. It probably was on very rare occasions by ignorant guys who had been in Viet Nam previously . But as a general slur for local populations it came into popular usage in Viet Nam. I never heard it applied to Koreans, and I served there twice. I did hear the term "slopes" used there, though not as extensively as "gooks" was used in Viet Nam. Different slurs for different people. Not a thing to be proud of, but soldier's are soldiers, and their culture tends toward the lower end of the cultural spectrum.

Your attention to detail is amazing, I can only imagine the hours and hours of research this story employs. Freakin Amazing Author!

loved it! two people with different lifestyles come together. can't wait for ch.6! ps, like all your stories i've read!

Is it safe to assume that the author has forgotten/moved on from this story? Would be nice to have closure and not be left in suspense about potential new submissions.

No no no not forgotten. I just keep getting sidetracked on new stories. Oh look, a squirrel..... but I do have writing going on, slowly, on chapters 6 and 7 so don’t despair.

I’m relieved to hear that we may get a future update! We know that you’re busy with other works and stories so there’s no rush. Thank you for your dedication :)

I'm happy to hear you're working the rest. It's an awesome story!

First ever comment on a story. I follow a few though. I'm glad to hear you haven't abandoned this series. I've found I enjoy your style & content. I'm just working my through from top to bottom. Keep up the great work. I look forward to the rest of what you've got on here.

No! I can't belive that this is the last (thankfully not final) episode of Baby Blue for now.... Another lovely story that at times can even bring a 58 yo man (must be a hopeless romantic deep down) a lump in his... throat. Not to mention in other places at times🤣🤣🤣... The sexy bits are exactly that... Wow my imagination went off the charts thinking of this petite girl in nothing but boots and chaps 🍆🍆🔥🔥

Chloe Tzang is far and away the most talented author on Literotica. (Published author myself - 14 books)

I see its been 5 years since chapter 5 ... A real shame there's no more chapters. Really enjoyed it. Too bad - now I feel "BLUE".

Does anyone know if/when the author plans on resuming this story? It would be awesome if we can get some form of an update for a new chapter!

Shame it's not finished.

love it, enjoying every chapter. Like the fact that we haven't quickly gone over the edge with sex and more importantly, extreme sex.

Looking forward to more

I’m waiting for the end, so I can comment on the whole story. Maybe a long wait?

A few typos but the story is great

All that bullshit about a “Novel” then you leave it six years?

I was really enjoying the story and trusted you as an author

A good story, (I have completed to Part5 and still going strong. Such a well thought out story and I imagine there has been lots of research involved. Now to Part 6!

Awesome series!

I really enjoyed this story. I really like how you brought two disparate worlds together, while carrying us along on Jay’s journey.

The widening of her view of the world, and her sexual boundaries, along with the building sexual tension had me thoroughly engaged, and invested to reach the end of their journey with them.

I am sadly disappointed to see that Chloe has left this series unfinished.

If like me, you enjoyed this tale, write her, and encourage her to finish this story!!!

Very well done. Great love story with a great backdrop. Wish you would take it the story again

Oh no! I ran out of chapters of Chinese Takeout. This series is great, but there is a big gap between it and The Temptation of Sammie Woo that needs filling. I also was wondering if you don't have a little of a Clinton syndrome. Ya know, I didn't have sex with that woman. Oral is sex Chloe and there was a lot of hot oral in here!

I really enjoy the series. Had an Uncle from Berkeley who rode with the guys who formed the Hell's Angels. Like hearing about the biker culture.

When can we expect to see Chapter 6 …

fabulous. can' wait for cptr.6. no pressure Chloe. Love your stories. Ski.

Once again great stuff, but alas you have left us hanging again.

:(

Chloe, I've been reading through your material for a couple of months now. I'm not a professional writer, but have done some creative writing as well as editing an organization's newsletter. I am currently coaching a doctoral candidate through his thesis on the side. My wife is Asian so your mixed race stories are particularly resonant because of all that comes with that package.

I am simply amazed at the breadth of the contextual settings you write from. That's what make's your material stand out. It's contextually good enough that either you've done a very good job of researching, or you have personal experience in a wide array of activities. Probably both. From University to surfing to sky diving to bikers to cruises. And a lot more. The way you articulate feelings is well done too. Again, I suspect from personal experience.

True, there are the misspellings, the wrong spelling of a word given the context, switching from first person to third person and back again. But that's simply a matter of tightening up the editing.

Your plots and narratives are really interesting, erotic and occasionally side-splittingly funny. When Olaf showed up at the Catholic girls high school to pick up Jay-Lin in a condom delivery van I laughed till the tears ran down my cheeks. I didn't see that one coming! Then there is the overall cultural/class contrast between Keith and Jay-Lin's worlds, and the irony that her neighbors are old bikers! That's the kind of creativity that keeps me coming back.

I really hope you keep writing. I know creativity can burn out. Life events can either inspire you or leave you totally flat. I wish you all of life's happiness. I sense that it's out of that fullness that you write. We, your readers, are the beneficiaries.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Can't wait for the next chapters, great characters just jump off the page.

Hi Chloe

I enjoyed Chinese Takeout but I wish you would have finished the story

Really would love to read more, it'll be like Christmas again.

You have a rare talent - it makes your reader understand the characters you draw. Sometimes it is a reach but always it is interesting. I personally dislike the over-attention to sexual acts (solely my pov but none the less it annoys me) and I frequently skip over all the wetness here and goopiness there. (I do know what sex is like.) Please continue with this sequence. I would love to know where this will lead. P.S. This is the very first time that I've ever given a comment to an author after reading hundreds if not thousands of stories on Literotica. P.P.S. Please use "you're" rather than "your" and "too" rather than "to" when appropriate - the error breaks the cadence of your sentences which are so much fun.