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Click hereI got up and went to the bathroom. When I returned Mavis was back in her chair and had her head down on her arms. I said, "Mavis, I have sold the two stores here and I took half of the college fund. You can have the house and everything in it except I will be over and pick up my exercise equipment. I am moving to Jackson and I will run that store. You can get the divorce when you like but don't try any shit. I can still ruin your retirement with the county. I promise you I won't unless you don't accept my terms. Is there anything you would like to say to me or ask me?"
She looked up at me with tears streaming down her cheeks and said, "Paul I am so sorry and I do love you. I hope one day you can forgive me. You have been much better to me than I would have been to you but you would never have done anything like that to me. I am sorry that I rejected your attempt at anal sex so long ago and I am sorry I didn't suck you off every day. If I had done those things for you I think I could have stayed true to you. I pray that you may forgive me someday.
I picked a sack off the floor and set it on the table and said, "Here are the tapes of you and Rick. My lawyer has the only one he needs. Everything is in here. It is your choice what you do with them." I turned and walked out.
Epilogue: It has been two years since I walked out and moved to Jackson. I have only heard from Mavis through the girls. She still lives in the house but she doesn't date and she never filed for a divorce. I have been living with a widow for about six months but my feelings are that I will never marry again. The first one took it all out of me. Amber and Ashley still consider me their "Daddy" and I see them about every other month. It took them a while before they could go home to visit Mavis and I think it is still a chilly environment when they do. I have found Rick through the Internet and he is still on my list. I will write the story when, "I repeat when, not if" I decide the time is right. That will be my choice and my decision.
Comments will be appreciated. I know I am a piss-poor writer and I am trying to get better. So don't knit-pick. Just do a kick-ass comment if you must.
For a piss poor writer you did a hell of a job with this one! Thanks for a we;;-written with fine plot and character development!
Psychotic. Made zero sense to stay together in that weird limbo. Mavis is a total slut. And delusional also.
Good story and hope u do find tha Asshole. Take him out and the world will thank you for it
If his folks "was" killed in a car wreck, why would the daughters go to his mother's house?
This cat would fuck up a suicide note.
BUDD100
The amazing thing I noticed about the commenters are:
They all have a opinion; not heavy on intellect.
26thNC said one of the nicest things I have ever read from him; I think he may have slipped up on his wording. --- "anonymous because it is hard to know whom to rebuke in comments"
I agree, you are a.piss poor writer. Start with basic grammar classes and continue learning by taking some creative writing courses. Continue classes until you earn a C.. Once you reached average, seek out the services of a good editor. Once you have your editor, start submitting stories again. By that time I will be dead and won't have to read this cliche-filled rubbish.
This was a fantastic line thst jumped put at me:
"It would be like opening the window and fucking the world."
I think I heard the theme from the Twilight Zone playing as I read option 3. Imagine if you will .....
I liked the read and appreciate its uniqueness but it's not in any way viable. And he still bought her flowers and candy, a car and slut clothes
Come on