All Comments on 'Coming Home'

Yes, very very well written and a good buildup in the story. Just enough dialog to make it nice and interesting; plus a slow cute n' sexy buildup. The sexual phrases and touching plus the next step being making out and hard sex was so HOT. I sure hope that in the morning and after that; being brother and sister are left alone in the house so they can really screw each other senseless !! Hopefully, Alexis tells her Mom so their parents will know and support them going further as they did at the beginning of that relationship. Thanks.