Crash-n-Burn Ch. 01

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Homerotic
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"Um, yes. I remember that. Uh, thanks, Doctor."

"If there are no other questions, that will be all. You will need make an appointment for four weeks from today. As before, if you experience a severe headache, blurred vision or nausea, call for an ambulance immediately. Those could be signs of an aneurism. Again, you may begin to increase your activity level, but do so very slowly and carefully."

The nurse opened the door, and Estelle pushed me out as she thanked Doctor Liu. I stayed quiet until we were well away from the office.

"You said I have a girlfriend. I told you before that my girlfriend broke up with me."

"And now you have a new girlfriend."

"Oh, really? Do I get a say in that?"

She leaned down to kiss my cheek. "Nope. You think that I'm doing all this work for you and don't expect something in return? I've got plans for you."

That sent a thrill through my body. "Do I get to know those plans?"

"All in good time, baby. All in good time."

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

In real life, I highly doubt that someone with injuries like that would be sent home from the hospital the day after waking up from an eleven day coma.

linnearlinnearover 5 years ago
Well Written

Very well done and entertaining. I look forward to reading all of them.

buzman0112buzman0112over 5 years ago
Great Story So Far!!!

I love the story so far. It flows well and kept me entertained!!! I can’t wait for the next installment!!! Nice job!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A little confusing but an excellent start

What a point to leave us waiting for more... The level of detail will be excellent for readers from the area.... for the rest of us it just lengthens the exposition and build up, though with the wonders of google street view, one could follow the cycling journey right to the point of the accident easily enough. I thoroughly enjoy the way you describe Estelle's stature and the Tinkerbelle references. Keep up the great work.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 5 years ago
Confused

And I just started. The names totally floored me not able to make sense of who is who. Is she an aunt of somebody?

Who is Cas?

Writing is good except for the complicated start. Simplify the relationships by removing all of them except one. Then add in whomever the woman and man are at the start.

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