Criminal Affair Pt. 09

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I don't know what I'm going to do. I know what I'm not going to do however. I'm not going to self-destruct anymore. I'm not going to blame other people. I'm going to go get my close enough.

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gromit1951gromit1951about 2 months ago

That was flat out an excellent story. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

loved it!

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

Dam if this chapter didn't have me looking for the box of Kleenex. Very emotional, to say the least. Five stars out of five.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Eh, Derek forgave her way too easily. She said she’d give him time and the next thing she’s almost committing suicide. He should’ve gotten her some medical and psychiatric help then made sure she lost his number. The next time they have a big fight or something goes wrong in her next career choice she’ll end up in someone else’s bed again and again and again....

lastman416lastman416over 5 years ago
Is this The End?

It’s hard to tell if this is the last part of the story. Jill seems to have reached a closure, but it also seems like you dropped a few things that might be wrapped up in another chapter. Plus, we had a brief segment from Derek’s viewpoint where he said he didn’t know what to do about Jill, to him seemingly accepting their relationship. Would be nice to hear his concluding thoughts, as well.

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